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[Archived] "[Quick Showoff] Post your latest maps"

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Arkshi said:
Revamped minotaur hell in Rook! :D

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Is not that bad, although looks like A LOT for just Rook.
 
I prefer the orginal one much.

@down: way better to me :)
 
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Thanks guys! :)

I made a simpler version, it looks a lot more like the original:

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In my mapping blackout this is what comes out as "mapping".
A fucking "pyramid".
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Hi.
I hope to get feedback from these two screenshots, taken in Remere's map editor.

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Pic. 2.
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Tell me what you think, and how I can improve for my next piece.

P.S: Sorry, the pictures are quite big.
 
Not bad, not bad :) Basicly most of that map is ok, just don't like lush grass as a roof in that case, the shaping of mountain in some places (ex. by that dried tree, soutf of it), don't like the straw mat you used there aswell the wheat - better use some other plants to detail those areas - wheat grows usually only on plains. It would be good also to randomize the trees, because it's not that good to put two trees of thesame type near themselves while there are no much other plants around. Strawberry plants is always an idea, but doesn't necessairly fit there, i'd remove. And last thing - where this river ends? Don't be shy do go further with it cuz for now it aint too much realistic, isn't it?

That was preety chaotic review, but I belive also at least a bit helpfull, the two ultimate advices are: 1.Look at others works and 2.Keep practicing! :)
 
@no1
Thanks a lot for the comment, I really appreciate it. I agree with you in all matters. I did this quite fast just to get feedback and see if I'm an ok mapper or a horrible one.

The river stopped there because there's nothing to the right, and I just cut it off with a mountain to keep it limited. I'm also aware of a few bugs/misses.
Thanks again!
 
I ment it's ok for the beginner - it also depends how fast you'll get progress but seriously, there are people who are horrible at the start and then turn out rly nice, it's all a matter of practice...
 
projsa said:
Hi.
I hope to get feedback from these two screenshots, taken in Remere's map editor.

Pic. 1.
2ib18vn.png


Pic. 2.
w1z4fk.png


Tell me what you think, and how I can improve for my next piece.

P.S: Sorry, the pictures are quite big.
Click to expand...

I love how you used the details, giving a story to the map by placing details on a certain place, I can already imagine someone living there. All together I really like it, would like to see more.
 
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