First time mapping in 4-5 years, need feedback =)

[wipperman10]

Hi people! I wanted to showcase some of my mapping. I made this today in a time span of about 3-4 hours.
This mapping is probably more suited for "Hihgrated servers" with teleports and such.

Hope you enjoy, some information about the actualy mapping:

First part: This is where you actually start the Journey to the "BOSS" cause this is a mapping that eventually leads to a boss. <-- My idea.


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The 2 PZED parts are locations which you arive to a little bit sooner, we'll get to that!

Second Part: This is where it kicks off, I havn't placed any monsters simply cause of the fact that i don't really feel like it. And because i don't have a server and this is strictly for fun =) <-- so far.



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Third part: The mountain, had some mayor troubles mapping theese =) I guess i'm allowed to, since it's been about 5 years. <-- Also sorry about the tinted part caused by RME, but cba taking 2 screens of the same area.



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Fourth Part: The Closeup, This is where you start reaching your goal, it's not a very "long" distance =) But with some cool monsters on the way i reckon it will be pretty hard =) Also, when you enter this part you arrive to the 2 pzed part in the beginning before you arrive at the bossisland.


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Last Part : THE BOSS ROOM. <-- this is where you're supposedely meant to encounter the boss =) Whichever boss suits your server best.


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That's it! I also want to ask you to not be insultive, I know this isn't godlike or anything =)

Feel free to leave feedback

Peace.




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[eiserne festung]

And now try RAW

 

[Basiq GM]

Haha Nice, I dont believe you ! After 4-5 Years? and that good?

 

[wipperman10]

And now try RAW

Haha, i will man =) Didn't wanna have to sit for like 100 hours when i'm just mapping for fun =)

Haha Nice, I dont believe you ! After 4-5 Years? and that good?

Haha, I swear to god =) I was mapping during the time I joined OTLAND, 6 years ago lel... I did some mapping for numerous EVO servers back then =) Still got it in me I suppose.. even tho this wasn't that good! Wish I could've showed you older works of mine =)

 

[Schmanky]

the mapping is bad, the picture quality is bad (they're blurry wtf), you haven't turned off the effects in mapeditor, the layout is bad (especially for a boss), pz right next to where a boss spawns ..? not to mention a one way, what is this a soloable boss? sigh

things are out of place, nothing matches, spammed borders/ground types, spammed doodads, you just took things that you thought looked cool and put them in ur map for arbitrary reasons, 0 creativity

 

[Rik123]

the mapping is bad, the picture quality is bad (they're blurry wtf), you haven't turned off the effects in mapeditor, the layout is bad (especially for a boss), pz right next to where a boss spawns ..? not to mention a one way, what is this a soloable boss? sigh

things are out of place, nothing matches, spammed borders/ground types, spammed doodads, you just took things that you thought looked cool and put them in ur map for arbitrary reasons, 0 creativity

That's not true!






The picture is not that blurry

 

[krille09]

Horrible

 

[Artis]

Where have you been? It's a totall shit. You should create to try again. You're a funny

 

[Schmanky]

Where have you been? It's a totall shit. You should create to try again. You're a funny

i laughed

 

[poopsiedoodle]

Step 1: Search for file
Step 2: Click file
Step 3: Press delete
Step 4: Open control panel
Step 5: Open programs and features
Step 6: Click Remere's Map Editor
Step 7: Click uninstall
Step 8: Wait for a little bit
Step 9: Continue with life

 

[TheNubCake]

I thought it was sent from the heavens above. THANK YOU LORD ALMIGHTY. YOU CURED MY BLINDNESS

 

[Andy Man]

I know this is you Neon.

 

[Himii]

Don't listen to everyone who just talk bullshit, keep trying look at some mapping tutorials
*Use small stones
*Use some grass tuffs
*Get ingame to take the pics! Look how >here<
Keep improving and ppl help him instead of just sit behind your screens saying hes shit!!!

 

[BlazeyBlaze]

Seriously why is everyone hating? You dont got any better to do with ur life?
He just wanted you'r opinions, Instead of calling it horrible and such give him tips like himii.

Schmanky who do you think you are? I feel like i gotta be the best mapper to post any pictures on this forum cuz of ppl like you.

I think its great work, i feel u when u say u map for fun and dont wanna use raw,
but belive me when u fight along time to edit a place u will be more than satisfied when done

Bad grammar i know givemesomehate<3

 

[auda]

Seriously why is everyone hating? You dont got any better to do with ur life?
He just wanted you'r opinions, Instead of calling it horrible and such give him tips like himii.

Schmanky who do you think you are? I feel like i gotta be the best mapper to post any pictures on this forum cuz of ppl like you.

I think its great work, i feel u when u say u map for fun and dont wanna use raw,
but belive me when u fight along time to edit a place u will be more than satisfied when done

Bad grammar i know givemesomehate<3

In the future when he have had a chance to become better - RAW will be the "just wanna have fun". It just takes time.

 

[Damon]

Hey there
First of all don't get disappointed because of all the hating. All in all Otland is here to help and encourage and ofc motivate each other, which some folks tend to forget at some times... Anyway as i said don't let it bother you too much, try to skim the comments for constructive feedback and keep working on yourself
Way to go mate, but hey: The sky's the limit

Kind Regards,
Damon