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[Angelic Fury] The Human Creation

Jaed Le Raep

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The Human Creation
Written by: Big Ray



The Human Creation

Kiel’orn grew angry with the dwarves pride, and in his rage he created the cataclysm, the destruction of the dwarven great city was powerful and loud calling the attention of the other gods. The gods stopped their warring and destruction and flew to the hidden planet kiel’orn had created.
Necrosis grew immediately jealous of kiel’orns race and whispered in their ears and soon lured them into his grace.

Kiel’orn lifted his hammer to the world, he was to smite the planet he had created and remove it from all existence. Before he laid his blow, Paladin grabbed his arm and stayed his wrath.
Paladin disliked the constant fighting between the gods and saw this world as a peace between them.

The gods gathered together and discussed an idea. They were all to add to this world and influence it to a small degree. They would all create races in their image and it was Paladin’s plan that the gods, seeing the smaller life forms living in peace, they too would have a truce to the pointless destruction of their squabbling. The conversation lasted 100 years and the treaty had been made. Each god would claim one race as their own. Minimal influence was enforced by all gods and they poured each of their magic into a artifact to be hidden away on the planet. If ever the treaty had been broken the magic would release and the magic from all the gods combined would smite down the treaty breaker and destroy him or her from existence.

Each god went to the corners of the world and created their races. To Paladin’s dismay it was not long before the races explored farther and farther from their regions and encountered the other races and began warring with each other. The gods cheered on their respected races and cursed their rivals. Paladin’s plan had backfired.

The wars grew more devastating to the world and Paladin grew far more frustrated until he called the gods together for the second time in history to discuss the planet. After much bickering a solution was offered by the unlikely source of Necrosis. He proposed the gods together create a race not under any god. The race was to have a will of it’s own and decide for itself how to live.
The gods agreed and the race of man was created with each god contributing to the creation. Little did the other races know that necrosis had secretly given the race not his powers but his mentality. The race of man could create and grow stronger given by kiel’orn.
The race of man could be kind and protective given to them by Paladin.
But as necrosis poured his magic in, the race of man could be cruel, jealous murderous, envious angry and much more. The gods realized the trick but too late to act for the treaty prevented the abortion of the race.

The race of man had been created. A being like no other born and began on a small island named Solitude where they began to learn and form their own history.

 
Awesome storyline :p. But I don't really think the name "Paladin" fits, just my opinion but w/e.
 
Thanks :) Any other foodback?
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Here, you can have your food back :mad:


It was good, but does it really belong in the Opentibia section?
 
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