Lua Cut Scene in OT - Need someone to look over my code

[Gaddhuve]

Hi guys.

I am trying to make something like a cutscene in my TFS server and need someone experienced to look over my code.


What is it meant to do?
*When you walk on Ferumbras throne you get teleported back 3 tiles.
*One second later Ferumbras will appear on the same throne and begin his speach.
*Later an NPC called Cho'Gall will appear after Ferumbras call.
*The NPC Cho'Gall will be gone and a monster with the same name will appear and start the boss fight.
*An monster called Fiend will appear to aid Cho'Gall


Code

local telepos = {x=531, y=285, z=12} 
local t = {
 
	text = 'Guests? Not expected, oh well.',
	text1 = 'As the kind host I am I will give you a warm welcome. Cho'Gall! Deal hear your masters call!',
 
	text2 = 'M..master.',
	text5 = 'Cho'gall. These pesents walk on your ground.',	
	text6 = 'Deal with them. Make them suffer!',	
	text8 = 'MAY THE TWILIGHT CONSUME YOU!!',	
	
	
	text3 = 'What will you have me do, Master?',	
	text4 = 'Concider it done.',	
	text7 = 'Prepare to run!',	
	

	npc = 'Ferumbras', 
	pos = {x=531, y=281, z=12},

	npc1 = 'Cho'gall',
	pos1 = {x=530, y=283, z=12},
	
	m1 = 'Cho'gall',
	m2 = 'Fiend',
	pos3 = {x=539, y=291, z=12}

}
 
function onStepIn(cid, item, position, lastPosition, fromPosition, toPosition, actor)
	if isPlayer(cid) then
	    doTeleportThing(cid, telepos)
		
		
	local v = addEvent(doCreateNpc, 1000, t.npc, t.pos)
	
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 1000, v, t.text, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 6000, v, t.text1, TALKTYPE_SAY)	
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 1300, v, t.text5, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 1700, v, t.text6, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 45000, v, t.text8, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		
		
		
	
 
	local f = addEvent(doCreateNpc, 6000, t.npc1, t.pos1)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 11000, f, t.text2, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 14900, f, t.text3, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 19999, f, t.text3, TALKTYPE_SAY)
		addEvent(doCreatureSay, 23000, f, t.text3, TALKTYPE_SAY)
	
			addEvent(doRemoveCreature, 24500, f)
			
	local g = addEvent(doSummonCreature, 24501, t.m1, pos1)
 
	local m = addEvent(doSummonCreature, 45000, t.m2, pos3)
		
		return TRUE		
	end
end

What are the issues?
*Both NPCs is created without any delay.
*No TALKTYPE_SAY appears from the NPCs
*The monsters does not appear
*The Cho'gall NPC does not disappear

Any help would be geartley appreciated!

Kind regards,
Gaddhuve

 

[Gaddhuve]

Bumping

 

[Cykotitan]

addEvent returns event id, not return value of function since this would be impossible when it's delayed, so better group doCreatureSay with addEvents that are spawning the npcs