Feed back on my mapping?

[Skylinx]

Hey guys, im a really bad mapper ; but I want some feedback, how would I make some of these better?!






Any suggestions for any of them? Please?!

 

[Beo]

It's really squary.. Theres no other shaped buildings except squares.. You should try the circle tool. It's really helpful.

Also, dont randomize so much. I mean, the second and third screenshots have real bad randomizing..

 

[Skylinx]

Thanks!
But I mean, you can't really make circle buildings lol.
The circle tool still makes square buildings xD

And I'll try and reduce the randomizing

 

[flaite1]

not bad mapping as your saying, but you could improve this.
-do not add small stones in the water
-play with raw pallete borders
-theres places where you didnt add nor small stones/grass tuffs, and that makes it look really empty
well theres not much things to add, i think u map pretty well

 

[Beo]

Thanks!
But I mean, you can't really make circle buildings lol.
The circle tool still makes square buildings xD

And I'll try and reduce the randomizing

Heres what I mean about the "Circle" buildings..

Something like that..

Though, like Flaite1 said, your mappings are very good. With alot of practice and some good feedback, you'll become incredibly good.

Repped you.

 

[Skylinx]

thanks a lot!
I haven't been mapping long, but I enjoy it.
and thanks for the feedback, I will attempt everything you guys are saying.

 

[Beo]

Your most welcome!
I'd like to see more screenshots when you've created new places.

 

[Neon]

No, don't make houses like that... omg...

Something like this should do some magic :>

 

[flaite1]

yea using the circle brush to do houses doesnt looks good :S

 

[Beo]

I was using it as an example.. <_<

Like Edron Magic Acadamy or something...

 

[Amrosh]

The Only comment is that it's so Random and some spaces and just pasted as it is.

 

[Skylinx]

Yeah, I understood.
Thanks Neon for that pic.

I am trying to avoid the randomizing.