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Jalorius

Jalorius

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So, I had a post on here once before, years ago... I figured I would just restart a fresh one as links were broken in the other thread (also, so that I don't have to keep posting all my works in the lastest mapping thread :) )

So here are a couple of my most recents to start it off:
I recreated my own version of Rookgaard (fully custom)

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I hope to keep this up-to-date as much as possible! Let me know what you think or if there are any pointers that you could give me to make them more appealing!

Cheers for now~
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Jalorius said:
Ok, I may need some help with this... A little unsure about how the houses look so I need some advice or some critique on them please!!

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I like it, but a few things that come to mind.

1. I don't think there should be any wood materials in this area. The wooden structural post for example near the lava is an accident waiting to happen xD

2. I love the feel of the flooring, walls etc, but the roofs of the houses are out of place imo. However, I can't suggest a decent alternative.

Obviously some people might like the things that I dislike, thats the beauty of human nature.

Love your style though! The mapping seems very desirable to play
 
Boy67 said:
I like it, but a few things that come to mind.

1. I don't think there should be any wood materials in this area. The wooden structural post for example near the lava is an accident waiting to happen xD

2. I love the feel of the flooring, walls etc, but the roofs of the houses are out of place imo. However, I can't suggest a decent alternative.

Obviously some people might like the things that I dislike, thats the beauty of human nature.

Love your style though! The mapping seems very desirable to play
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@Boy67 thanks for your feedback - I do agree with the wooden structures and there placement, I just wasn't sure what else I would use, but I suppose I could use another alternative like a stone pillar as such.

Also, for the roofing... I looked and tried many different styles and I couldn't come to terms with any that I preferred using other than this one as it does give it a little more of a "built" look as I don't think that the other styles of perched roofs would have worked here.

Thanks @Nemphis for the kind words!

All-in-all, I appreciate the feedback once again! Anything to help make it more appealing to others is what I strive for!

Cheers~
 
I won't be able to update as much as I was hoping for due to real life circumstances, but here are a couple more to show some more of my Rookgaard off!

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(Orcs are planning to grow and attack strong! We must fight back!)

And of course, another from my Dwarven City I am currently working on

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Hope you all enjoy!

Cheers~
 
Hey all, been quite some time since I've uploaded any pictures. I've decided to give something a try that's out of my scope and would like some critique on it before I continue if there is anything I should adjust.

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Cheers~
 
For me it seems good. Keep working well :)
Btw nice maps (above this one)
 
I like your style, it's kept simple, well thought out and it works! Quite nostalgic too, very nice, keep more coming :)
 
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