[Mapping] My first try!!

[Atrix]

hello i making 100% custom map and can you tell me what i must upgrade... this is my FIRST!!! map..
take a look and tell me what i need upgrade...

here are some photos i maked...
that map i start making today so... dont be agressive... hehe





i hope you will add some comments!

 

[Ferchox]

Well you need to work Alot. and try get better writting english.

 

[Neon]

Yeah, i cant say its Beautiful but its pretty good for being your first try..
You keep mapping and you'll get it Check my Tutorials out, under my signature!

 

[Pr0xy]

Well you need to work Alot. and try get better writting english.

Its hard to get better english. But you can always learn