Mindless sprite thread.

[Mindless]

Hello,
I'm just new to otland.
And i'm going to create a server with new sprites, so it will be very nice if some spriters could correct my work.
Let's show my first sprites i made.



This is an sprite that i made with a tutorial.


And this is a sprite i created after that without a tutorial.


There will be more soon..

 

[Samuro]

First? Omg

The handle on the second one is a little too long other than that it's very good for your first ones!

 

[Syntax]

save as .png

 

[Chaos ruler]

Bump.

 

[Mindless]

First? Omg

The handle on the second one is a little too long other than that it's very good for your first ones!

Hello,
Do you think it's better now?It was supposed to be a spear actually.

Here is the change of the sprite

Remake: View attachment Spear.bmp
Edit.
New :

 

[Samuro]

I can't see your image

 

[Winnerandy]

I can't see your image

I can :blink:

 

[Mindless]

Ok,
So could you please tell me if it's good?
Or correct me on some points,
Thanks.

 

[soul4soul]

really nice job on the remake. maybe try to get a little better/more shading on the handle of it. either way i like it a lot.

 

[Lime88]

The remake of spear looks good!
And your hammer could need still some shading.
But nice

 

[Carlos9]

I kinda like it its good for a begguner 6/10