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my music (hiphop&rap)

IMac

IMac

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intro:im 16 yrs old from atlanta, GA.. i used to get in trouble in school for fighting an all kind of stuff. i even got expelled from school. until i figured out why not write it down instead of taking it out on someone? that's when i decided ima give writing lyrics down. its been about 2 months and i dont even get mad! music is what i want to do.

inspirations :il have to say im inspired by young jeezy, tupac, t.i and playa circle

where im i trying to go with this? well im tryin make it somewhere even if im not the best i wanna be one of them.

thats all if you like please subscribe to my youtube channel & facebook pg

newest work:
check my new shit let me know what u think
[video=youtube;yeR0Rx-9M7s]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yeR0Rx-9M7s[/video]



old work

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_[video=youtube;HocKwq0ynGQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HocKwq0ynGQ[/video]
[video=youtube;GJ9y_pMueoE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJ9y_pMueoE[/video]

note: i know that it doesnt sound to good im working on tryin to get a new mic, but it aint easy specially how things are now in the US an is its hard to find a job specially since im 16, but ima just have to settle for it til i can afford one :)

links
youtube: styleflow90's Channel - YouTube
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Style-Flow/136501886441107?sk=wall
 
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Just keep on practicing and maybe someday you will laugh about your old songs, but for now... my ears are bleeding. You have pretty nice rhymes, but you don't have a flow. 2 months is not enough to put your rap in the internet. If you really like this, keep it going. For me it's not worth releasing yet.
 
Qbee said:
Just keep on practicing and maybe someday you will laugh about your old songs, but for now... my ears are bleeding. You have pretty nice rhymes, but you don't have a flow. 2 months is not enough to put your rap in the internet. If you really like this, keep it going. For me it's not worth releasing yet.
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Pointed out everything.
 
ik im working on it ya kno an mainly they bleeding cuz the mic suck ass lol
 
sucks dick, try to talk about real shit, thatll give you some respect from the listeners, nd try to use more wordplay and double rhyming combined with faster rapping.
 
flaite1 said:
sucks dick, try to talk about real shit, thatll give you some respect from the listeners, nd try to use more wordplay and double rhyming combined with faster rapping.
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"talk about realshit" lol obviously u didnt listen to the 1st song an anyway if i wasnt talking real shit aint like it matters.. mainstream dnt talk real shit just swag an a beat = $$$ but yea try again
 
listen, I do not want to crush a dream or anything, but:
1. we do not need Entertainers(too many to even count)
2. stick to your day job(when you get one)
3. I would suggest to keep this as a hobby(makes a good therapy when the bad gets worst, since it is a form of expression and thus an outlet.)

you can become anything man, just not YAR(Yet Another Rapper).
Try design or anything(that is more productive for you and society).
 
lol true but im bout to buy a new mic in the next 2-3 an i got my flow an everything its gonna be fire.. ya gonna be in for a surprise
 
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