In this thread ill ask for advice, show some songs and asking for your honest opinions in my songs, im from chile so my accent sucks but ill go usa for a year so that aint gonna be a problem when im back 
, shud i complete this song, whatya think, ill work more on the beat, this is just some pattern made in 5 minutes, with 20 min lyrics, shud i complete it?
still needs the chorus that comes from after this shit:
my artistic name is Piero my name is gian piero lol
(gonna work more on the beat tho)
YouTube - lastorma.wmv
, shud i complete this song, whatya think, ill work more on the beat, this is just some pattern made in 5 minutes, with 20 min lyrics, shud i complete it?still needs the chorus that comes from after this shit:
my artistic name is Piero my name is gian piero lol
(gonna work more on the beat tho)
YouTube - lastorma.wmv
