[New project] -- showoff!

[sorcerers king]

Hello I started a new project and started to map abit with my friend's!

Here I will show my work.



This thread will be updated please check this post because I'm going to add new ss to this post
Thanks!

Regards,
Sorcerers king

 

[Sentielo]

Your mountain is a square, you should make it less square XD.
Good luck. Details are nice.

 

[BardockTornado]

You should add the image's direct link, not the one you added. It's better if you cut what you wanna show, just the map.

 

[sorcerers king]

Your mountain is a square, you should make it less square XD.
Good luck. Details are nice.

Well, it's not just first floor

Thanks for your comment.

You should add the image's direct link, not the one you added. It's better if you cut what you wanna show, just the map.

Thanks.

 

[Summit]

I'm sorry to say, it's absolutly poor. It has no style, it has no dept or feel, its a very basic area (Litteraly it looks like you just took a square brush and put the mountain in then slap on an inlet). the dirt spots in the grass are the same way, and to top it off they are far too wide. The bushes and trees are obviously doodad burshed and they are poorly doodaded at that.

You need to have much more natural areas, no that doesnt mean more detail (Though it does need it badly). What that means is it needs to be realistic, look at the world around you, how many perfectly square mountains have you seen resently?). The same goes for your grass and nature.

My only real suggestion is work from raw for a week or so and always try to improve your work, never just settle.

 

[sorcerers king]

I'm sorry to say, it's absolutly poor. It has no style, it has no dept or feel, its a very basic area (Litteraly it looks like you just took a square brush and put the mountain in then slap on an inlet). the dirt spots in the grass are the same way, and to top it off they are far too wide. The bushes and trees are obviously doodad burshed and they are poorly doodaded at that.

You need to have much more natural areas, no that doesnt mean more detail (Though it does need it badly). What that means is it needs to be realistic, look at the world around you, how many perfectly square mountains have you seen resently?). The same goes for your grass and nature.

My only real suggestion is work from raw for a week or so and always try to improve your work, never just settle.

Thanks but the bushes and trees was raw