Newbie mapping, criticism!

[dattenasdf]

Hello. I thought this were the right thread to ask for criticism. Because I'm very new at this sort of mapping.

I have created some nature and started with a cave. But before I go on with it, I would love to hear what you think about it. What I should try to change, make better or make instead of something. So I don't need to change the whole map.
So. Let's have a look, shall we?

Photo Album - Imgur

There you have three photos of a simple, in my opinion, good-looking nature.
What do you think? I would love to hear everything you have to say!

- datten

P.S - Sorry for my English.

 

[GhostX]

Not bad tbh, you need to improve but that's obious for a new mapper. You have potential.. My advice is to look through the mapping threads of Hesten, Blackstone, Peroxide, Limos, Demon Eldorath(if he has a recent one (?) Macedoon etc. These members of the community are fairly decent mappers and you can see their styles and quality from each picture. This should give you a rough idea and some inspiration into mapping.

Good luck

regards

 

[dattenasdf]

Not bad tbh, you need to improve but that's obious for a new mapper. You have potential.. My advice is to look through the mapping threads of Hesten, Blackstone, Peroxide, Limos, Demon Eldorath(if he has a recent one (?) Macedoon etc. These members of the community are fairly decent mappers and you can see their styles and quality from each picture. This should give you a rough idea and some inspiration into mapping.

Good luck

regards

Thanks! I will check em' out, but at the same time, not copy to much from em'. And try to make my own style.

 

[Zatjin]

That was pretty decent, and you have very much potential, keep up the good work, and I will defiantly be around this thread often!

Keep it up!

 

[hiperkarma]

Not bad at all. Try to get inspiration from other mappers, just to see how it goes.

 

[kCAB]

Looks pretty good dattEn!
But I think you're better in cs 1.6 mapping!
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