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Second attemp at a City

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Martijn

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Yeah, well give me some comments on how to improve it.
If you see an bug, tell me how to solve it :)

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- Overieuw of the city, some things are not done like hunting spots and some detailing, borders etc :p

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- The temple, I like the idea myself, an temple that starts on an mountains and then you have to walk to the city :p

See second post, I can only post 4 images at a post.

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- Well, that's the depot.

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- The rot cave under the city. I know there is an bug there with the water but I don't know how to solve it.

And as last an older screenshot but also comment it.

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If you look at the mountain temple, it has enough detail right?
 
7/10.
It's some jungle trees/plants, that would match in a jungle.
And more details please (bushes,trees,flowers etc.), allover the map.
But it's a good map except that. :)
Keep working on it?
 
Humm .. too much details at the rot cave for me o_O [i mean in mountain tiles], the city have squared-buildings, a lot of people don't like that [me too xd]. Temple isn't bad.

Hmm .. 7/10 [yay like others :s].
 
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In my opinion 7/10

1- Temple is without details (only the bookcase)
2- Some jungle trees/plants (like Orange Tree), that in my opinion shall be at Jungle =P
3- Too much details at the rotworms cave.
4- Tibia is an medieval game and in the medieval cities the roads were not straight lines.

It's all, keeping working ;)

Sorry for my english. =/
 
In my opinion 7/10

1- Temple is without details (only the bookcase)
2- Some jungle trees/plants (like Orange Tree), that in my opinion shall be at Jungle =P
3- Too much details at the rotworms cave.
4- Tibia is an medieval game and in the medieval cities the roads were not straight lines.

It's all, keeping working ;)

Sorry for my english. =/

Well, I don't really know how to detail an temple, if you look in real tibia, it only has some pilars.

And for the squared buildings, I could make an triangel building but that just doesn't fit lol.

Thanks for the comments.
 
As I can see in the first picture you didnt't finshed it so you should finsh it before you make pictures. the third you can add trees ect.
 
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dpyg3.jpg

I think its looking great apart from a cramped DP
I think without the Boxes on that side and 1 wall taken out it would look more opened up!
 
You need more details at the city..

Less of those mountain cracks in the rot cave,

The water bug is fixed if you..
use ID 5631-5686 instead of those you use..

They're jusr boarders so you'll have to make water under them.

Also I think you should use more variety at the houses, so it don't get that Squary..

So, I'll give it 5/10
 
On map more details and there will be well. Estimate for executed work 8/10. :)
 
Looks pretty good, but some bushes and grass decoration is messed up. Still looks nice in my eyes.

8/10
 
i'll just say that u need to be more detailed bro... anyway its a good map :)
 
8/10
Like other said:
-To much Detail in rot cave
- and the jungle tree like everyone said
 
8/10 good work thats revelry neweset any big prusion ;D Gz
 
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