[Teaser] Relica

[Samuro]

This showoff will be about the city Synoria that will be in a server named Relica further ahead.

As with all my threads. DON'T FLAME! and please give constructive critisicm

The city was originaly founded by fishermen in the early dark ages. They kept a good trading deal with other cities. Soon others saw it's potential and moved there. Soon enough the fishermen where excluded to a small part of the city. Even when they had this setback, the fishermen didn't quite care for having lost some area. They kept building in their little area. At the same time the rest of the city was growing.

It was infact growing so big that nearby animals started to leave their territories so they wouldn't get killed. After a while the mayor of the city declared himself King of Synoria and the continent around it.

Thereby it became a capital. Today the fishermen still live quiet and excluded from the normal society. Living their own peacuful lifes.

Don't flame, and please give constructive critisicm.

Regards.
Mackan and Yuvbeen

 

[Xenios]

Seems nice so far but you could show screenshots of hunting places and if you're going to make a story, you should also do it for every picture or atleast a space between the pictures.

 

[Ronaldino]

Looks pretty cool, but use more natural things, like stones or whatever.

 

[Snel pUppie]

@ Xenios: He said that the showoff was about the city ;p

On topic: You could of had screenies of the king and his men or something Would make it more interesting... And maybe a screenshot of a fisherman in action?
Overall it look'd good.

Good luck.

 

[Jester]

It looks good but I dont like so much grass decoration on the ground

 

[Xenios]

@ Xenios: He said that the showoff was about the city ;p

I meant that he also should make a teaser with hunting places.

 

[Snel pUppie]

I meant that he also should make a teaser with hunting places.

Oh I see Thought you meant that he should of added pictures to this showoff since this showoff was only about the city... nvm

 

[Deaktiver]

Wow you're a good Mapper

 

[Mackan™]

Thank you Deaktiver
I'm glad to hear someone likes my work.

 

[gr33nd3v1l]

Looks good, and what's most important to me it looks REAL ^^

It doesnt show in the screens if you got any but try adding balconies to the castle where the king's quarters are and make sure that that area looks royal. ;D

 

[Mackan™]

It doesn't need balconys to look royal ^^
But the King's castle is remade since this teaser and now it sure looks royal.