Negative
- Colours don't fit together at all!
- Strange structure.
- Boring layout. (Meaning nothing that really catches your eye).
- All in all it's not that attractive =/
Hope you can keep the good things and change the rest.
Me dislike. could have been much batter if you would put more time on it.
Seriously, in my opinion that kind of post is ridiculous. I mean what does he gain from it? Nothing at all! He knows that he should've been spending more time to it, yet it probably did cost him a lot of time already. It's his first layout as he said, so he needs suggestions and critics.
ZoOorO, even if I know you well and for a quite long time now, this post wasn't smart at all.
To be honest, I've seen worse... I can't say that I like this one but I don't really hate it. You should look for other homepages, how they are structured and then just keep practicing Do also take a look at the colors, which colors together are attractive?
Before you create a weblayout you should know what kind of website you are going to build (like in this case an AAC layout). And then you should draw a sketch of a website until you got something you like and after that create it in whatever program you use for making weblayouts.
Hope this helped, don't hesitate to question anything!
Good luck!