Kewb's Gallery of MAPS

[Kewb]

Hello there OTLanders, I've been thinking on mapping in like a month or so, and I've decided to start map
Anyway, this is my first public screenshot and map overall:

All kinds of critics is appreciated. No flaming, please.
Thanks,

 

[Cypher]

I'm a newbie too

What I think?
- I think it's over spammed with the stones.

Suggestions:
- Remove some stones from the cave.
- This is not a mapping rule, but I think it would look better: Use the 2 different cave borders you have in the palette.

 

[Luffy]

use less of those grey small stones and more of the little brown ones
use some brown gravel at the sides, not too much
rest looks pretty nice

 

[Prest]

Remove some of the mushrooms thingies.

 

[Kewb]

Allright, thanks for the critism, I appriciate it!
A lil' to late atm to map some x) Might come more tomorrow!
Marry Christmas and a happy new year OTLand !!

 

[Agion]

Yeah, it looks alright, but you didn't use gravel at all, and i think that's the only thing that this cave misses.

Here's a good looking RPG cave done by Neon:

 

[Neon]

That picture is very old.

 

[Kewb]

Okay, thanks! Here's my second shot x)

https://i.imgur.com/ncGFT.png

 

[Luffy]

Remove the grey gravel, remove the old gravel, make the normal gravel spots a little bit smaller and put them more at the cavewall sides and small spots in the middle of the cave
but not like that
NEVER grey gravel on brown grounds

 

[flowdude]

I agree with Luffy here, Never use grey gravel on brown spots. and use another ground with boarder to make it more alive =)


Keep it up