Poster - For server

[Faceless]

Hey guys, im working a bit on a poster to advertise for a server.

I am a bit unhappy with the title, probably going to change that. But otherwise, can you give me some constructive critique on how i may improve the design overall?

Thanks every! (and sorry if this is the wrong part of the forum, just seem'd like the right place)

 

[HalfAway]

It seems a bit empty between each feature, besides that looks good.

 

[Faceless]

Hmm perhaps i should put in some crystals or something from tibia to keep the style?
Thanks for your comment i should figure out something.

 

[hehemidu]

It's too big, make it smaller and make the pictures more exciting!
ALso change: Hidden--> Secrets. It sounds way better
love that server, i hope it gets some more attention

 

[Faceless]

It's too big, make it smaller and make the pictures more exciting!
ALso change: Hidden--> Secrets. It sounds way better
love that server, i hope it gets some more attention

Indeed! - You say it's too big? so parts too far apart or the simple size of the poster is just too big?
I mean it IS a poster after all

 

[Faceless]

well first of all i contracted some space with crystals. lets have a look.

 

[hehemidu]

I ment thing are too far from each other, also the crystals dont make the pictures look good :/
what program are u using?

 

[Faceless]

Yeah i think the crystals are off too! - hmm maybe i can put it all closer together.

(im just photoshopping. so everything is easy editted