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Webdesign Andy's Template

Andy Man

Andy Man

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Ok, I know its bad, But its my first one and I tried. I know I need help but I prefer if you didn't post like you did last time.

So look how I started with my signatures,
http://otland.net/f119/otland-159379/

And now my signatures are like these,
http://otland.net/f119/andys-art-160290/

You may ask yourself why I put up my signatures thread, it was because if you realize the first signatures have lots of tips and I used them and now I'm better (in my opinion) making signatures.
 
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That looks horrible. Did you use paint for this? :o
 
Keep it up man, don't listen to people that flame without letting you know why they don't like it and how to improve it.
 
Thanks guys, and Three Magic, that was very rude man it even hurt me, Because I tried to do it (my first time) and you say that. I don't think your first web designing was very awesome. And I'm still learning how to use photoshop, Im 14, give me some years to grow up.
 
If you're going to nag on his templates, do it constructively.
 
Using such 'messy' font styles for a signature/logo may be suitable, but as for the website itself; you should use cleaner font styles. Ones that you can actually read without much effort. Neither should you use colours as saturated as the red and blue in your screenshot. They do more harm than good. (:
 
Chris said:
Using such 'messy' font styles for a signature/logo may be suitable, but as for the website itself; you should use cleaner font styles. Ones that you can actually read without much effort. Neither should you use colours as saturated as the red and blue in your screenshot. They do more harm than good. (:
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Thank you. That was what I was looking for, some help.
 
Imo it looks too random, like the background and the coulurs have nothing in common. Like.....nothing.
 
Andy Man said:
Thanks guys, and Three Magic, that was very rude man it even hurt me, Because I tried to do it (my first time) and you say that. I don't think your first web designing was very awesome. And I'm still learning how to use photoshop, Im 14, give me some years to grow up.
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Maybe I was a bit of an asshole, I apologize. I shouldn't have been so harsh.

Here, I'll give you some constructive criticism instead of being an asshole.

- Colours, make a colour scheme first, don't just let it flow. For e.g. red, blue, black, white is a really ugly combination. Try something like purple and gray, white and blue, black and yellow.

-If your going to use the shape tool alot, make sure you make some difference to things, such as transparency, strokes etc, don't just keep it the same or it'll look flat and ugly.

-The text is messy, use something easy to read.

- The banner at the top, it's covering the guys face, remove it and just add text, theres no need for that banner to be there.

I guess thats all the tips I could give you for now.

Once again, I apologise.
 
Three Magic said:
Maybe I was a bit of an asshole, I apologize. I shouldn't have been so harsh.

Here, I'll give you some constructive criticism instead of being an asshole.

- Colours, make a colour scheme first, don't just let it flow. For e.g. red, blue, black, white is a really ugly combination. Try something like purple and gray, white and blue, black and yellow.

-If your going to use the shape tool alot, make sure you make some difference to things, such as transparency, strokes etc, don't just keep it the same or it'll look flat and ugly.

-The text is messy, use something easy to read.

- The banner at the top, it's covering the guys face, remove it and just add text, theres no need for that banner to be there.

I guess thats all the tips I could give you for now.

Once again, I apologise.
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Thanks for the tips.
 
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