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Alegres

Alegres

You break it you buy it
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Hello.
I want to show you my last works. They are not the best, because i'm beginner.
Please give me solutions which i should take to do better maps.

manswithboathouse.jpg


gateo.jpg


By the way, 100% SME.
 
all the wooden floors are done wrong >__>
and wats with the messed up rock in the second pic? o__0
and also the balconies need to be supported by something, can't just be hanging there
 
I think she ment like this...

2i264o2.png
 
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Yes, but actually i was thinking what does it mean that all wooden floors are wrong so thank you HesteN and Neon too.

EDIT:

One new screen:
strych.png

and remakes:
domek.png

brama.png
 
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Another question. Is everything right with nature in my works? What should i change and how does it generaly look?
 
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Err, mate on that updated pic, it really dosent look good with thoose enormus pillars for such a small balcony, yes it was things like that we said was needed, but not thoose bigs for that, and especially not in the middle of it, use the wooden "sticks" ur using under it, the ones at the wall
 
i'm not good myself either, but looks little blank to me, maybe a few more details here and there? also, a lot of signs are preeettty lame to me ... suit yourself
 
Are you sure? I tried it, and it's pretty cool, because when i'm using only raw palette it's just like Simone or better.

Anyway, I've got sentiments to Simone :<.
 
I'll give you my honest opinion about your mappings, their not the best ones i've ever seen but their good. At the moment your still learning and your getting better from what I can see, so continue your work and try using some of Neon's Mapping music ^_^.
 
I do not listen to music when i'm mapping. Neon's music? Can you give me link?
P.S.
On this screen Neon's got special palette, i meant - he's got pretty big images and mainly - it's not like in my rme... How to set this?

No question... i've already worked out it.
 
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