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Just wanting feedback.

I personally dont like the guild name in it.
But other than that its dope
 
Stead of Paraplegic swim team, wud look better in it:
Death Row..or
All Eyez On Me
 
They are okay. My brother is a graphic design major and I had him look at it. Basically, It's put together in 3 main sections, and it's a pretty basic design and background. Also, and most importantly, there are too many font types. Generally (at least for advertisements) you don't want to use more than 2 font types per ad.

Individually, I like the fonts, and I like the sd rune's with 1337. However, overall, once you look at it closely all the different elements end up clashing.

I'm not trying to slay or anything, so take it as constructive criticism please. If you want more feedback, put them into the graphic section of otland.
 
Myths said:
They are okay. My brother is a graphic design major and I had him look at it. Basically, It's put together in 3 main sections, and it's a pretty basic design and background. Also, and most importantly, there are too many font types. Generally (at least for advertisements) you don't want to use more than 2 font types per ad.

Individually, I like the fonts, and I like the sd rune's with 1337. However, overall, once you look at it closely all the different elements end up clashing.

I'm not trying to slay or anything, so take it as constructive criticism please. If you want more feedback, put them into the graphic section of otland.
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WOW MYTH YOU THINK YOU'RE THE BEST??



Jokin, i know i didn't make them but thanks for the feedback :p
It will help Zarz in the future perhaps :peace:
 
Myths said:
They are okay. My brother is a graphic design major and I had him look at it. Basically, It's put together in 3 main sections, and it's a pretty basic design and background. Also, and most importantly, there are too many font types. Generally (at least for advertisements) you don't want to use more than 2 font types per ad.

Individually, I like the fonts, and I like the sd rune's with 1337. However, overall, once you look at it closely all the different elements end up clashing.

I'm not trying to slay or anything, so take it as constructive criticism please. If you want more feedback, put them into the graphic section of otland.
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If I wanted to go in depth with it I'd of atleast loaded photoshop xD and I was only going for basic "get the message across" and theres only 3 differnt types of fonts. SD image took a while seems I used 6 screenshots to make it lol

and ty for criticism :)
 
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