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[Archived] "[Quick Showoff] Post your latest maps"

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I'm not good, I'm not professional, but I'm trying my best...

This is a small garden inside a 'castle' of mine, say your feelings.

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Remmacs said:
I'm not good, I'm not professional, but I'm trying my best...

This is a small garden inside a 'castle' of mine, say your feelings.

2eknjtl.png
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I think it looks pretty good mate! But I would skip the metal fittings, and a closed room with only a broken bottle looks abit strange imo :d and remove the grass border in the room entrence! Keep it up!
 
Remmacs said:
I'm not good, I'm not professional, but I'm trying my best...

This is a small garden inside a 'castle' of mine, say your feelings.

2eknjtl.png
Click to expand...

You have improved alot since last time I saw you map!
Still there are alot of things that you could improve when mapping, I'll say what I think of this piece.

First of all, remove all unnecessery details like cobwebs, borders inside houses, broken bottles and metal fittings etc. I'd personally also remove all of the dirt borders seen in the picture, and I wouldn't either mix grass borders and use the lawn next to normal grass, using all kind of borders in a city ruins the theme, it can't be too unique. I would also remove either the fountain or the well, the well fits mustly for poor villages or smaller cities meanwhile the flashy fountain suits for big kingdoms, thais etc. Whenever you are going to create a city, plan what details you are going to use, at the moment I cant see 3 kinds of flowers and several swamps of the same kind, all these flowers and swamps are probably not able to live under the same circumstances. I'm also wondering that the pillars are doing, is the city underground? If it is then you should remove all the growth and the lamp.

You have come far enough to find your own unique style, I will enjoy watching you improve in the future, good luck! :)
 
@HesteN
- Alright, thanks mate.

@Kejsaren
- Thanks for the good feed, I'll try to improve and thanks.
 
Are you using the 'wrong' doors for the 2 small rooms on purpose? It doesn't look that well.
 
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