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Danashups

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Hello, started to sprite recently and I want your feedback!

this is Luffy from One Piece:
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Please, share with me your thoughts and suggestions to improve
 
looks pretty good,
i would like to see some items like Axe/Sword/Club/Spear/Shield
:)
 
looks good, but this face xd
and change background to pink/purple/anything other
 
Muito legal, da próxima vez posta as Sprites com fundo de outra cor, fica melhor pra avaliar.
 
I liked the colours you picked for One Piece (they look smooth which is good). I feel like the others are to bright.
 
Milotic remake !

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It's looking fairly okay mate, but it can be improved in a few ways, too. First off, the tail. It's becoming too dark too quickly, try adding another middle color between #fbd69f and #cfa361 to blend it more. Secondly, the ears/hair(?), the pink part on the first sprite, is way too shaded. Shading there should be, i think, very minimal since it has very little space to work on (#fe9a73 color should be dominant in this case). Lastly, the eyes, brows and antennae connection. It's a mess to simply put it. Antennaes should be an extension to its brows, and brows should distinct eyes from the head. Here's a quick example what exactly i meant by all of this:
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It's looking fairly okay mate, but it can be improved in a few ways, too. First off, the tail. It's becoming too dark too quickly, try adding another middle color between #fbd69f and #cfa361 to blend it more. Secondly, the ears/hair(?), the pink part on the first sprite, is way too shaded. Shading there should be, i think, very minimal since it has very little space to work on (#fe9a73 color should be dominant in this case). Lastly, the eyes, brows and antennae connection. It's a mess to simply put it. Antennaes should be an extension to its brows, and brows should distinct eyes from the head. Here's a quick example what exactly i meant by all of this:
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Thanks for the feedback !
 
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