- too large area between teleports (unless you want to add something in middle)
- autoborder, pointless blood everywhere
- anjoying multiple wall with columns
- press "V" to turn off "highlight items"
- go read some... MANY tutorials about mapping
- don't even think about remakes unless you learn how to map yourself
- make maps good quality, not quickly("A" turns off autoborder)
- try to learn something from good mappers(don't even look at me xD), do not stop editing maps unless you are proud of pieces you made, seriously, compare them to works of other mappers
- do not use speedyshare, use something that could give you direct links to images, to put them in [ img ] tags (find some image hosting service/website)
I think it's all for now. Try to make something good before you post your work again. Work hard on maps, you will see results.