Flaite1 the foken noob maps

[flaite1]

Hi i just started mapping 2 days ago haven't maped in years, so please dont be bad with me

Tried to do some cold ambientation, not frozen but cold

 

[Peroxide]

pretty good actually, I like it, besides the random ice stalagmite.
Some of the nature could be more spread out to

 

[Petracyus Myth]

Looks simple but good

 

[Peroxide]

forgot to say, add some small stones, pebbles if u have to

 

[Demon Eldorath]

No idea how those kinds of plants would survive in that climate since their jungle plants. which kinda tells me it needs some heat and moist.
EDIT;
Nor do I know why u'd edit the picture that badly ;p

 

[No0Bii]

Nice, but i think it would be better if you remove the ice and add other nature.

 

[flaite1]

 

[aftonbladet]

Is that serious?

 

[VenoXx]

fuuuuuuck

 

[flaite1]

whats so bad about it?

 

[EvoSoft]

It just doesn't look good, cannot explain, sorry.
Anyway, that first pic looks good, just that it's wrong plants and if you want that "Cold Invironment" try use some snow, not fully covererd, just some...
My tip to you:
Read some Tutorials

Regards,

 

[flaite1]

im pissed, it won't get into full size and looks like shit like this

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1399/underconstruction.png

 

[EvoSoft]

That one looks pretty good, soon you might add some creatures to the maps?
Maybe you can try out a cave?
All though there are some stuffs here that shouldn't ^^
But I don't blame you, it's not easy to know what to put where when you're a beginner.
Regards,

EDIT: And some stuffs are missing xD

 

[flaite1]

 

[EvoSoft]

Getting better Keep on!
Regards,

 

[flaite1]

xD thx

 

[flaite1]

Fish master: the ultimate sea guard:

Hp:5200 + an incredible poison and fire powers to destroy hes mortal enemies.
Summons up to 4 Swamp fish.

 

[Evil Mark]

pretty good actually, I like it, besides the random ice stalagmite.
Some of the nature could be more spread out to

I agree on the first point aswell, the ice was kinda random..

Think realistic, d00d. How can fire burn on dirt? I'm pretty sure it'd die.. BUT! You're improving alot!

 

[EvoSoft]

Uhmm, that's kinda.. non-sence, anyway...
My tip is still: Tutorial

 

[Fonzie]

Fish master: the ultimate sea guard:

Hp:5200 + an incredible poison and fire powers to destroy hes mortal enemies.
Summons up to 4 Swamp fish.

A fish doesn't survive there. Where's the water?