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Going Batty!

Jaed Le Raep

Jaed Le Raep

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Brittle Cave
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Known for it's humid atmosphere as well as it's dry and brittle earth, this cave system is home to three different lifeforms. At first sight, it seems to be home of creatures known as Creeps. These little creatures love crawling over their victims and sink their small bit sharp teeth into their victims, biting them time and time again.

As the adventurer makes their way through the creeps, they find themselves with a confrontation of bats. These frisky fellows attack their victims by sending ear-piercing screeches through the cave system, not only alerting nearby creatures, but also using it to hinder their victim's ability.

And finally, beneath the brittle and fragile earth, extends the cave system into 2 seperate poisonous, gook-enveloped caves. One, too slimey to host any life, but slimy enough to walk across, and the other that has enough ground to host disease ridden roaches who are prized for their legs.


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Good one, Jaedy!
It's funny, because you were implying that... his map.. was...
My god that was horrible. What were you watching last night, The comebacks of a 3rd grader?

And yes. Those caves are crap. There is nothing different about them; they're just a generic olookicanspamnewsprites type of cave.
Make something that can catch the eye of the player, not something that looks like it was put together while drunk.
 
I really dont like it. Its probably the fact that all the ground looks the same and is kinda hard to look at.

Try mixing it with some dirt or something.
 
Jaedy said:
Such as?

Also, I appreciate all the flaming, but if someone could give actual feedback, it'd be much more appreciated :)
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Along with one thread where you 'show off' some real work.

And you seriously think she took 5 minutes to make that and take the screens?

Please...10 tops
 
trees dont belong underground lol
i like the structure of the cave but it needs better detailing
 
Very good try, :) im not going to be a complete fucking asshole like most of the self obessed OMG looks at me fucks in this thread, try adding some different colours, and as previously said :P some mud yo.
 
Tyronel said:
Very good try, :) im not going to be a complete fucking asshole like most of the self obessed OMG looks at me fucks in this thread, try adding some different colours, and as previously said :P some mud yo.
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Hmm, mud and colors.. I never really thought about that. Thanks for the constructive feedback, and it's good to see someone on this forum could give actual constructive criticism.
 
its nothing spessial but it aint bad just the wrong type of grounds and details.

Add more stone/small stones maybe 2 diffrent wall types rock/normal. add some mud an swamp and maybe some small plants around ther and ofc some plant wall and cave wall twigs

thats what i think =)
 
Just ignore the people who flame, if you don't respond it ends there. Anyways, it feels like it needs a bit more, just to make it seem more realistic.
 
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