I still suck at mapping LoL

[helvetti]

I made small training area cuz i was bored, its not awesome but its something.
Hints please what i should change
Updated it little bit, hope that it look a little better
With TPs

With Furniture

made one from ice too, its not maby the best in the world but i my self like it a little bit

 

[Arn]

It lacks realism. The insane amount of lava makes no sense. The over-use of the carpet is very apparent. And for some reason you have a bear carper in the bottom left. On the far right, you have amphorae next to stoves, next to anvils. None of it makes any sense.

 

[Scarlet Ayleid]

Please do not place download links outside the Download section

 

[dusieqq]

arn it's just a train target place, nobody care how it looks as long as it does it's work

 

[Limos]

@Up
I don't agree with that. People do care how it looks. same as people care how a temple looks. This is the same as saying: Nobody cares how a temple looks, as long as it does it's work by letting people spawn there if they died. Makes no sense.

 

[Bintzer]

yeah dusieqq, maybe you don't care but we sure do

@ont
sry but it looks horrible
i agree with arn, its terribly random and doesnt make any sense whatsoever
i'd give you some advice on how to improve it but i don't even know where to start...
i guess the best i can give is just delete it, read some mapping tutorials and try again :/ sorry for bein so harsh but im just being honest

 

[Arn]

Thanks for getting my back guys. As far as advice on how to change it... try to think about it this way: "does this look like it could exist in real life?". If the answer is no, then you need to take a look at making it more realistic.

 

[hiperkarma]

Not bad, but you gotto check out some tutorials and the tips for a proper screenshot.