Krastinak - Beginner 01

[Krastinak]

Hi guys, tell me if it looks good (for a beginner) and give me tips if you have any

 

[cAnox]

1. Remove the leafs on the water.
2. Stop putting grass tufts on the trees.
3. Don't use that many trees in a small area like that.
4. Stop use autoborder.
5. Don't put bushes on mountain ground.

Fix 'em and check out some tutorials.

 

[Fargo]

Remove lilies on water and the grass tufts on the trees but it looks good for being a beginner.. better than my first times..
Oh use the auto border tool for the mountain and dont put bushes on rock soil...

 

[Peroxide]

The only thing I like is the quality of the picture, other than that the mapping is bad. Stop using autoborder.

 

[Krastinak]

@Up

Thanks both.

Heres a new one (forest)

(Thanks to Kangarew's "Nature Style" Tutorial)

 

[Fargo]

Looks better now

 

[Krastinak]

Thanks Dark199

Cave.

(Thanks Neon for your "Detailed Cave" Tutorial)

 

[Fargo]

add cave debris.. and atleast your not a stubborn beginner that doesnt look at tutorials..

 

[Krastinak]

Just made a Depot (simple, but im a beginner )

(Thanks to Karel for he's "RPG City" Tutorial)

 

[Fargo]

Looking better, and remove the crystal collem and add some trees

 

[Prest]

looks cute

 

[Krastinak]

Thank you Prest.

I just made a simple Jungle Cave.
What do you think?

(Thanks to Neon for the "Jungle Cave" Tutorial)

 

[Dexftw]

Nice it's always good to start with a semi-trace to get better

 

[Fargo]

Looks nice

 

[Krastinak]

Thanks, i appreciate that.
Well i gotta go now, see you.

 

[Peroxide]

looks good, a bit spammed with jungle plants but still good.

Wish you'd stop using big text to write the credits to tutorials.
You aren't anything like Jadson. You're better

 

[Prest]

Remove 1 or 2 plants from south and on the cave walls at the right maybe change a few of them so it doesn't look so straight, 7/10, you're improving alot, nice that you're following tutorials.

 

[Krastinak]

Wolf spawn

 

[Luffy]

so you basicaly autoborderd some nature place, added some trees, two boats and some wolfs?
I thought I was going to see some cave or something

 

[Etedan]

Total auto-border i don't like Wolf Spawn.
Rest is ok