Maltexor's Mapping Try's

[Maltexor]

First of all last time i was mapping is around 4 years ago so here is my first try:

 

[Maltexor]

No Feedback any critic's or something?

 

[Siramix]

No roof for the house?

 

[Maltexor]

Not yet adding it later

 

[Maltexor]

removed

 

[Schmanky]

meh, seems random & like a 999x OT

 

[hehemidu]

First of all last time i was mapping is around 4 years ago so here is my first try:


Shop Island:

it's decent for not having mapped for 4 years, but here are some things you could improve:
* remove those whirlpools in the see (there are way to many and they dont really go that well in the sea i feel)
*the water on top of the mountain feels but odd. maybe put some grass around it or just remove it.
* detail your boat , it's too empty, also add some railing and make it 1 sqm less broad.
*your nature is too random, stick to 2 or 3 types of trees. remove those dwarven trees especially.
* Not sure how you want it but i would split the big house in some smaller houses and make this a little village. also don't try to mix to many details with each other: the dragonhead statue for example doesnt really fit here imo

Try to use RAW a lot, but you prolly know that allready .

But the most important thing is: Enjoy yourself while mapping and judge your own mappings: Do I like it? does it look natural? For what purpose did i map it? playable or just for showoff?

Hope to see some more mappings ;
Good luck!

Kind regards,
Hehemidu

 

[Maltexor]

it's decent for not having mapped for 4 years, but here are some things you could improve:
* remove those whirlpools in the see (there are way to many and they dont really go that well in the sea i feel)
*the water on top of the mountain feels but odd. maybe put some grass around it or just remove it.
* detail your boat , it's too empty, also add some railing and make it 1 sqm less broad.
*your nature is too random, stick to 2 or 3 types of trees. remove those dwarven trees especially.
* Not sure how you want it but i would split the big house in some smaller houses and make this a little village. also don't try to mix to many details with each other: the dragonhead statue for example doesnt really fit here imo

Try to use RAW a lot, but you prolly know that allready .

But the most important thing is: Enjoy yourself while mapping and judge your own mappings: Do I like it? does it look natural? For what purpose did i map it? playable or just for showoff?

Hope to see some more mappings ;
Good luck!

Kind regards,
Hehemidu

Thanks for you nice Feedback!

I will change some thing's wich you mentioned like some smaller house's and totally change the mountain and some detail's

Btw i know about raw mapping but i sux alot on it

 

[Siegh]

Aside from what Hehemidu already pointed out, I feel like I should give you some tips:

-Avoid making buildings too big and squarish, if you really need them big give them some proper structures and details.
-There are too many different sprites on your nature, try to regionalize areas with a few selected things, like pine trees and one kind of stones for one.
-Try not to look like a 999x map, give things a realistic purpose to exist.

 

[Maltexor]

I hate to map cave but okay! I was bored and changed to raw mapping.


Maybe i will add a bit or adjust it or you can give me some ideas?

BTW: Sorry for the lightning i always have 100% light on Normal Player Account idk why xD.

 

[Klank]

This piece looks sooo much better! This is actually pretty good
Continue with what ur doing, its a big progress already !

 

[Maltexor]

This piece looks sooo much better! This is actually pretty good
Continue with what ur doing, its a big progress already !

Thanks

That's how it looks im Reme at the moment:

 

[Maltexor]

So here i got it now with lightning effect's

 

[Blackstone]

I like it!
You are improving very well and pretty fast
Keep it up!

 

[Peroxide]

So here i got it now with lightning effect's

Getting a lot better, glad to see you removed what I wanted to see removed xD
Now I just hope you'll take the time and improve on things like, bordering ground tiles and the cave wall tiles.

 

[Maltexor]

Getting a lot better, glad to see you removed what I wanted to see removed xD
Now I just hope you'll take the time and improve on things like, bordering ground tiles and the cave wall tiles.

Thanks

For sure i will Improve this! But at the moment I'm Moving so it could take a while + 1 week no internet connection enough time to map on this cave

 

[Whiper Triper]

nice keep it up

 

[Testerus]

Interested too.
Keep up the good work!