Marok Small Art

[Marok]

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[4drik]

Nice arts.
I really like dwarven tile and the last stone.
Can I use both of this sprites?

#Down:
OK.
Maybe some trees and grass like there?

 

[Marok]

yes, you can use it. but are not good sprites.

 

[Marok]

training:

 

[4drik]

Not bad but middle of sword should be marked sharper.
Try to avoid using black lineart inside a sprite, only outside.

I will show you what I mean, my example:

Check it

 

[Thorn]

training:

Follow 4drik advice, that's the same i would told you, and keep practicing, you will get better on time

 

[Marok]

Not bad but middle of sword should be marked sharper.
Try to avoid using black lineart inside a sprite, only outside.

I will show you what I mean, my example:

Check it

Like it
Thanks, i'll try again

Edit ~~

 

[4drik]

First version of weapon have much better lineart than second one.
One more time my advise - the same as in my second post there.
I will not change your sprite any more, I will just show you what to do:

#Down:
Exactly, now it's much better about two first swords
Good job.
You made big progress.

The last - still need to be better.

 

[Marok]

i'll try more tomorrow
this is what i've done now

I'm with a problem, in the first sprite (outline), maybe the proportion ..

 

[Marok]

edit ~~

 

[4drik]

Lineart of priest is not that bad, could be better, but not bad.
Practice shadow, maybe something like that:

Rest are ok.

 

[Marok]

edit~~

 

[Marok]

 

[4drik]

Awww, that's pretty
You can make beautiful map with custom sprites of yours.
Good job.

 

[Marok]

 

[Marok]

edit ~~

 

[Thorn]

Dude, great to see you are motivated keep on the good work

 

[Marok]

 

[Marok]

 

[Marok]

So bad