my first SPRITE

[andres papera]

Ah. Soy Andrés. Más conocido como (papera), soy de Colombia, excusa de que no entienden a veces, porque yo uso el traductor jajaja. Porque hoy empieza a ser un (sprites) y este es mi primer resultado. Quiero crítica para ayudar a mejorar. GRACIAS A TODOS.
En este momento se me olvidó También me gustaría saber si usted tiene cualquiera. Todo el esquema tiene que ir o negro como el color que queda?.
Hay dos imágenes a conocer.


NOMBRE DEL MONSTRUO: JALATIN BLANCO

 

[andres papera]

Hi. I am andres. Better known as (papera), I am from Colombia, excuse that they do not understand sometimes, because I use the translator hahaha. Because today it starts to be a (sprites) and this is my first result. I want criticism to help improve. THANKS TO ALL.
At this point I forgot. I would also like to know if you have any. The whole scheme has to go or black as the color that remains ?.
There are two images to know.


NAME OF THE MONSTER: JALATIN WHITE

 

[Thorn]

Well andres actually that's very good, the perspective is perfect, you only need to create more contrast to create shadows , and since it's a white creature, the outline doesn't need to be black, it can be a dark grey

 

[andres papera]

Gracias por su ayuda bro. seguire Lo Que Me Dices

 

[Raggaer]

Looking good. Waiting to see "Jefe de guerra jalato" <3

 

[andres papera]

Gracias Bro. Jajajaja si intentare hacer al jefe de guerra

 

[andres papera]

My second sprite, a Mace Gold..
I accept criticism

 

[andres papera]

Hahaha these two sprites. One is pikachu And the other nose like a larva. The problem is not that
Pikachu I did it with (Paint.)
And larvae with (PS).
As you can see pikachu I did with RGB color model, the larva I made with color model HSB color model.
For you or for the tibia model. Which of the two models serves to warm.
And tell me snags or tricks for PS if they may not have been able to dominate.

 

[andres papera]

I also want to know if this design perspective is well done. And if it's wrong, let me know, please.
I want to do a project. But first I need the help of you who are the ones who know of spriter.

 

[Ramirow]

This is the "Jalatin Blanco" you created?

 

[andres papera]

YESS!!!! XD

 

[Ovnyx]

wow awesome work, im from colombia too!!, this remember me my dofus times hahahaha good luck and keep going

 

[Madarada]

Did that remake to help you.

Try to put more contrast, i mean use darker colours it will increase size.