My first Sprites

[Arlianin]

This is my first sprite:

The Olympic Sword.


The Nature Sword.


I know this one that follows is not that good. But tell me what should I improve in it.
The Royal Sabre.


Dragonic Sword.


Don't critizise it much. REMEMBER ITS MY FIRST SPRITE!!! XD.

Comments plz.

 

[Me again]

well improvements are always in time so keep going and improve

 

[Arlianin]

Updated. Added the Dragonic Sword. Hope you like em.

 

[Arlianin]

New:
Crown Sword:


Idea by:
- My Friend Rafael

 

[kish]

the sabre is abit weird, but the rest is nice

 

[Arlianin]

yeah the sabre was when I tried to do a sword like the demonrage using paint. Now I got Photoshop

 

[bbzkarim]

not bad actually, done in PS?

 

[Arlianin]

nop I did Dragonic and Royal Sabre in Fireworks.

 

[Arlianin]

Two new sprites!
I'm not that good at making trees or nature so look at this:


And this is the Plate sword:


Any Comments?

 

[Arlianin]

The latest tree:

 

[Xenios]

The latest tree:

That's a rare tree but the other ones are nice except the sabre.

Btw, the 'Dragonic Sword' should be 32x32.

 

[Arlianin]

Yeah kinda. That last tree should be larger.

 

[Shy]

Lol, I kind of like them. They are cute Way better then what I could even try to do xD

 

[Jonhow]

OMG the Dragonic Sword and the The Olympic Sword are so nice!!! looks like there is someone talented to do this

 

[GoldRoger]

I really like your "Nature Sword" but I think you could do the others better, like more shading etc, nice works overall, keep it up

 

[dekar]

I can put the size to him that it wants to an item?

 

[Hazher]

for u first sprite are good

 

[Pvls]

Tree could be more izomethric

 

[squalor]

dragonic sword is wayyy too big, it needs to be 32x32 (or is it 16x16?)

 

[Neon]

XD looking pretty funny I like the first sword