My own spawn (begginer)

[Exxivi]

This is one of the first mapps.


The way to the cave :


In the cave :


The way to the other side :


The other side :



Rate and give tips

 

[Binho®]

3/5

Cya!

 

[loveinabottle]

ur english is as bad as your map

 

[Neon]

Actually, this is really good.
Since it's your first map, I give you 7,5/10.

:thumbup:

 

[Exxivi]

Actually, this is really good.
Since it's your first map, I give you 7,5/10.

:thumbup:

Thanks

ur english is as bad as your map

bad english ? i cant find anything whrong whit the text:blink:

 

[Sharp]

just 2 problems with the text,
mapps --> maps
off --> of

other than that is

 

[Pro Warbringer]

i love it! ;']

 

[Archez]

ur english is as bad as your map

You're worst that him.

Errors in your text:

* "ur"
* "ur english is as bad as your map"

Save the bad comments for you.

@Exxivi:

I would give a 7~7.5/10 to that work.

It's nice.

 

[loveinabottle]

You're worst that him.

Errors in your text:

* "ur"
* "ur english is as bad as your map"

Save the bad comments for you.

@Exxivi:

I would give a 7~7.5/10 to that work.

It's nice.

care to actually look, i feel sorry for you. dear god. and to actually correct "ur" hahaha

 

[Peroxide]

Doesn't look half bad

6/10

 

[Archez]

care to actually look, i feel sorry for you. dear god. and to actually correct "ur" hahaha

You were talking about his errors right?

That's your error.

^_^

 

[Nux]

Doesnt look so bad, i like it 7/10

 

[supershady]

You're worst that him.

Errors in your text:

* "ur"
* "ur english is as bad as your map"

Save the bad comments for you.

@Exxivi:

I would give a 7~7.5/10 to that work.

It's nice.

i agree with you archez .. since that dude logged in and he's been calling people bad names and being rude , calling for fights ..

:thumbup: yea i'd give 8/10 for his 2nd time mapping .. Keep it Going Man!

i love it! ;']

so do i .. i loved it too

Actually, this is really good.
Since it's your first map, I give you 7,5/10.

:thumbup:

yea i bet you're right giving that out of 10 ..

ur english is as bad as your map

well no one is as bad as you .. still .. you're the worst person in here ^_^ Not really the Worst .. i know someone who really talks like you .. and you know what i meant .. < the other worst person is you on your main account>

care to actually look, i feel sorry for you. dear god. and to actually correct "ur" hahaha

yea yea you can just stand infront of a mirror .. and say this sentence <care to actually look, i feel sorry for you. dear god. and to actually correct "ur" hahaha> .. you'll Feel Great ..:thumbup:

 

[Tony Pa]

Noobsan ?..... English sucks but your map is nice.... L*kJ*L

 

[loveinabottle]

not gonna bother to answer shabbys bullshit, he maps as a bum anyway and should be talken away his privligies from speaking in this forum.

 

[Dante]

ur english is as bad as your map

just shut the fuck up man dont post on his thread if you dont want to say anything that contain with the thread ffs

almost first time im being serious here in otland!

loveinabottle you think its fun if i call you "burininhellyoubottlehead"

maybe a little bit but still -.-

 

[Hellrage]

I feel sorry for you because you have to rate someones english skills when they are not important and then do it with a post in which you make as much spelling mistakes...

I think your map is okay but i'll have a closer look on it later when i have time

 

[loveinabottle]

i didnt rate his english , i compared it to his mapping

 

[supershady]

i didnt rate his english , i compared it to his mapping

dude take my advice .. your building some serious problems with other .. you want to be hated by most of the people in here?? don't you?<_<

 

[Kereyza]

It's really good except the first picture I dont like the nature