galsegal90
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i have now few days off to write storyline to my map.. But how? I aint a writer and i dont know how or where to start.. Anyway.. Any tips or examples will help
storyline-how?
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All you need is imagination or you could cheat. Look up popular games and take bits of their story line and put it into one. Like recycling 
You did english at school right? Why don't you think about brainstorming ideas etc? then put them together in a way they make sense
think, the chars gonna be good or bad, your char cud be fighting against evil killing demons and shit while he summons animal creatures to fight the devil wich its the final boss.
wOW i created a pro server in some moments
wOW i created a pro server in some moments
galsegal90
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i tried and started but anyone can give an example? Its still not normal writing its for map
iMadison
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this is a quick crappy storyline i made, was for my war serv~ i didnt even re-read it fully to check for mistakes n crap xD
don't have to read the whole thing though, it's just an example, as you asked
A New Beginning
A hundred years have passed after the people had finally rid of the Triangle of Terror, the mighty Demon Kings, from the land Tibia. And with his absence, all of the demonic beings and evil minions that once terrorized the citizens of Tibia started disappearing, and soon enough, they were no more... For once, Tibia and its entire people were at peace. But this would not last long.
On the night of the 36525th day, exactly 100 years from the defeat of Demon Kings, a lone adventurer stumbled upon a hidden cave near Ab’Dendriel which had never been known to exist. His wits told him not to go forth, but his curiosity forced him to do otherwise. So onward, he went alone, not knowing what to expect. And what he found was something that was going to change the land of Tibia forever...
He ran straight for King Tibianus in Thais to tell him the news of his discovery and at once, the king and the queen dispatched their best warriors, the sons and daughters of those who slayed the Triangle of Terror, to go to this hidden cave. What they found there shocked them all and it took all their bravery to not flee and run. On the ground before them was a sleeping demonic being. It’s skin a deep black color with white rune markings covering it from head to toe. It had beastly large horns that could penetrate the thickest of armours with ease. Before these young heroes lay the sleeping body of something that was only thought as a myth. It was Apoc, the Envoy of the End.
Legends say that before the time of man, the land of Tibia was nothing but a flat wasteland, but a battle between two mighty beings occurred. That was the battle between Apoc and Seraph, the Envoy of the Beginning. Their fight had changed and shaped what Tibia was to that day. But the fight abruptly ended when they found out that neither of them was going to live the battle, so they made a pact instead; they would both sleep in peace. But Apoc was a deity of destruction, so he said that if he was awoken, he would destroy this land they were fighting for by sacrificing his body, so that way no one owned the land. With this said, Seraph vowed to wake up and give his life to cancel his destruction. And now, with the presence of the offspring’s of those who slayed Apoc’s brothers, the Triangle of Terror, he opened his eyes. He rose to his feet and stared down at the young heroes and smiled. "The time has finally come,” he said.
The white runes started glowing, lightly at first then slowly to blindingly bright. The young heroes knew that they could do nothing to stop Apoc to the fled back to Thais as fast as they could. On the way there, grounds were cracking, volcanoes were bursting, and the sea slowly started to swallow everything. The land of Tibia was truly coming to an end.
When they arrived at Thais, everything was chaos and mayhem. Houses were collapsing and people were running blindly, not knowing what to do. But when a giant tsunami was about to hit Thais and end its existence for sure, the wave hit an invisible force that stopped the wave from progressing. The people of Thais all stood silent in disbelief. For now hovering above the city was an Angel. But it wasn’t just any angel. It was Seraph, the Envoy of the Beginning. He smiled down at the citizens of the last city standing in all of Tibia. He then vanished with a flash of light, and all was calm. No more ground shaking, no giant waves, nothing. Seraph had given his life to save mankind so it could continue on.
And even though the last Tibians alive knew that the times ahead were going to be harsh, they knew they were given a chance to continue their legacy for a reason. A new beginning had risen...
World Gone Mad
It had only been five years since Tibia was destroyed and already troubles were arising. Many people had lost their sanity to the thought that eventually they would run out of resources to live with and they would all die. But still many stayed strong and kept on working together to stay alive and to eventually expand Thais slowly. But unfortunately, things took a turn for the worse.
A plague hit the city, but it wasn’t a normal sickness. It caused the infected people to become crazed and savage. From then on those people were called Savages and were kept in a prison under Thais. The infected ones insisted that there was nothing wrong with them, just that their eyes were opened finally and they could see that the only way to survive is with less people. But the normal people did not listen to them and kept them locked behind bars where they could rot. But one night, the there was a massive earthquake that nearly threatened to destroy Thais but luckily, it stayed standing, though what used to be the sewers and prison underground was no more. The quake had changed it completely and had destroyed the prison, setting the surviving Savages free. And that very night, while a lot of the Citizens were still vulnerable, the Savages attacked.
Many lives were lost, many people turned to the barbaric side, but even so, many still stood strong and stayed sane and normal. Before long, with the help of the magically gifted people, the Citizens had set up safe zones in which the Savages could not enter, and not long after, the Savages did so as well. And so Thais had turned from the last city standing of Tibia to a battlefield. The mission of the people was to continue Tibia’s legacy and the survival of mankind. But both sides fight strong and without mercy. What will happen to Thais? Will it turn into a flat wasteland? Or will it finally find peace again and slowly expand? Only time can tell…
don't have to read the whole thing though, it's just an example, as you asked
A New Beginning
A hundred years have passed after the people had finally rid of the Triangle of Terror, the mighty Demon Kings, from the land Tibia. And with his absence, all of the demonic beings and evil minions that once terrorized the citizens of Tibia started disappearing, and soon enough, they were no more... For once, Tibia and its entire people were at peace. But this would not last long.
On the night of the 36525th day, exactly 100 years from the defeat of Demon Kings, a lone adventurer stumbled upon a hidden cave near Ab’Dendriel which had never been known to exist. His wits told him not to go forth, but his curiosity forced him to do otherwise. So onward, he went alone, not knowing what to expect. And what he found was something that was going to change the land of Tibia forever...
He ran straight for King Tibianus in Thais to tell him the news of his discovery and at once, the king and the queen dispatched their best warriors, the sons and daughters of those who slayed the Triangle of Terror, to go to this hidden cave. What they found there shocked them all and it took all their bravery to not flee and run. On the ground before them was a sleeping demonic being. It’s skin a deep black color with white rune markings covering it from head to toe. It had beastly large horns that could penetrate the thickest of armours with ease. Before these young heroes lay the sleeping body of something that was only thought as a myth. It was Apoc, the Envoy of the End.
Legends say that before the time of man, the land of Tibia was nothing but a flat wasteland, but a battle between two mighty beings occurred. That was the battle between Apoc and Seraph, the Envoy of the Beginning. Their fight had changed and shaped what Tibia was to that day. But the fight abruptly ended when they found out that neither of them was going to live the battle, so they made a pact instead; they would both sleep in peace. But Apoc was a deity of destruction, so he said that if he was awoken, he would destroy this land they were fighting for by sacrificing his body, so that way no one owned the land. With this said, Seraph vowed to wake up and give his life to cancel his destruction. And now, with the presence of the offspring’s of those who slayed Apoc’s brothers, the Triangle of Terror, he opened his eyes. He rose to his feet and stared down at the young heroes and smiled. "The time has finally come,” he said.
The white runes started glowing, lightly at first then slowly to blindingly bright. The young heroes knew that they could do nothing to stop Apoc to the fled back to Thais as fast as they could. On the way there, grounds were cracking, volcanoes were bursting, and the sea slowly started to swallow everything. The land of Tibia was truly coming to an end.
When they arrived at Thais, everything was chaos and mayhem. Houses were collapsing and people were running blindly, not knowing what to do. But when a giant tsunami was about to hit Thais and end its existence for sure, the wave hit an invisible force that stopped the wave from progressing. The people of Thais all stood silent in disbelief. For now hovering above the city was an Angel. But it wasn’t just any angel. It was Seraph, the Envoy of the Beginning. He smiled down at the citizens of the last city standing in all of Tibia. He then vanished with a flash of light, and all was calm. No more ground shaking, no giant waves, nothing. Seraph had given his life to save mankind so it could continue on.
And even though the last Tibians alive knew that the times ahead were going to be harsh, they knew they were given a chance to continue their legacy for a reason. A new beginning had risen...
World Gone Mad
It had only been five years since Tibia was destroyed and already troubles were arising. Many people had lost their sanity to the thought that eventually they would run out of resources to live with and they would all die. But still many stayed strong and kept on working together to stay alive and to eventually expand Thais slowly. But unfortunately, things took a turn for the worse.
A plague hit the city, but it wasn’t a normal sickness. It caused the infected people to become crazed and savage. From then on those people were called Savages and were kept in a prison under Thais. The infected ones insisted that there was nothing wrong with them, just that their eyes were opened finally and they could see that the only way to survive is with less people. But the normal people did not listen to them and kept them locked behind bars where they could rot. But one night, the there was a massive earthquake that nearly threatened to destroy Thais but luckily, it stayed standing, though what used to be the sewers and prison underground was no more. The quake had changed it completely and had destroyed the prison, setting the surviving Savages free. And that very night, while a lot of the Citizens were still vulnerable, the Savages attacked.
Many lives were lost, many people turned to the barbaric side, but even so, many still stood strong and stayed sane and normal. Before long, with the help of the magically gifted people, the Citizens had set up safe zones in which the Savages could not enter, and not long after, the Savages did so as well. And so Thais had turned from the last city standing of Tibia to a battlefield. The mission of the people was to continue Tibia’s legacy and the survival of mankind. But both sides fight strong and without mercy. What will happen to Thais? Will it turn into a flat wasteland? Or will it finally find peace again and slowly expand? Only time can tell…
iMadison
Back from the dark.
dude that was so sick.
question, Cirta. why do you have a pokemon baddy as your ava~ xD
question, Cirta. why do you have a pokemon baddy as your ava~ xD