I can hardly see any potential in you, sorry.
If this was your 'better' work, then I feel indeed sorry.
Want me to point out several things, to approve my own words?
Here goes..
- The colours you use (diffrent grounds) do not match.
- The way you use nature is awful, try to make it more realistic and why the hell do you use so many flowers?
- Use gras tufts more often and fucking randomize grounds. (Grounds still unrondomized are a shame!)
- Get your map alive, with creative ideas. Your map is just plain to me.
- Your house looks empty, it's just a big space of nothing. Fill it or make it not as big as you did it.
- Your waterfall is lame. Search for MMBs Tutorial how to create a good looking waterfall
- Your roads are just straight, some small curves and straight again. Why should people walk along them? It's a longer way then walking directly to the place. Just make a direct way, that doesn't look to boring.
- The left gate from your jungle camp looked alright.
- The nature of the jungle needs a big bunch of improvements as well.
I know I'm harsh, but atleast I speak my own opinion and try to help, unlike other guys around. I could keep going on with pointing out things I dislike, but I don't feel like getting your mood down to the ground so I'll leave it for now. If you knew me, then you'd know that this post was harmless.
It's my opinion, don't even try to accuse me on that.
Else you'll feel my wrath.