A new work

[galsegal90]

Well, i'm still working on my map (i'm kinda new at it..) and srry i'm making everytime new post cuz my posts going to other pages till i have time to keep work on the map..
anyway..

Today I'm bring you 4 pictures.. we'll start with a small aol/key rings shop

The 3 next picture are part of a mystery island.. - Victim Island

Comments please.. its importent so I can get better..

 

[BardockTornado]

The first one looks nice, the rest look a bit ugly with bad detailing. Try using thin grass tufts, combine other dirt grounds, use mangroves in the water edges, and use only RAW, that means no auto-bordering please. ^_^

 

[Wendt]

I'd say it looks quite good for a newcomer, altho if it's going to be a real server, that Aol shop ain't very good, people can push the boxes away and get a free Aol + keyring..

 

[galsegal90]

Well.. i made this items unmoveable so its okay.. but give me more tips please.. what to change what i missed..

and bardock.. i'm using a lot with the raw.. and only the squares i'm using auto border

and what to change about the detailing? i mean what is wrong? what isnt right in your eyes?

 

[BardockTornado]

I dunno how to explain, but you can place this map in the thread for revamps and I'd revamp it for you. ^_^

 

[Cykotitan]

Uh, some of the decoration is just too random, IMO.

 

[galsegal90]

As? dont just give a comment.. explain so I can learn from it

 

[BardockTornado]

Dead trees around healthy trees and flowers just don't look right. The thorned branch and the spike look wrong too.

 

[Cykotitan]

Yea, that's about it. And I wouldn't use those grass hills, they look horrible.
And the terrain looks random and out of place, too.

 

[Nogard]

GooD Mapping,
Good map, more need not exaggerate the nature is not it?

Learn where to put nature!

 

[Xedrium]

Sux Quality