Alegres Unskilled

[Alegres]

It's time to show you few pictures. I don't know if they are good. Every sugestion counts, help me finish it! =)

 

[GhostX]

They are good enough on their own. Nothing really needs to be added

Awesome, although the Underworld = Hell, I personally think your map is nice regardless!

Maybe make deeper floors fiery?

And fiddle with the light.. Use those green light dragons etc?

Also, regarding the last picture; skull on lower left of shot is semi-bugged

But i love it

Even though you should of edited post, i guess you needed to state you added pics so WHO CARES

Good job mate!

 

[Alegres]

Lol GhostX, I adore you! There's really a few people how write such long comments =) I really appreciate it m8!

Thanks for all your words. I'll try to do something with light effects. Also I'll try to make next parts of the city look better =)! Thanks once again.

 

[GhostX]

No problem mate, i feel that if i'm going to criticise something, i need to explain in detail

It's nice still, i really get an "undead" "afterlife" feel with them

Good job!

 

[Alegres]

Fixed it a bit:

 

[GhostX]

Are those dragons the "on" version.. Seems like no light is added by them

Anyway, i like still

 

[Alegres]

More comments? :<

 

[Rosenthal]

My first post on this forum. That looks great Alegres! Keep it up

 

[Alegres]

Thank you =)

New pieces...

 

[Redrax]

Shit! It's really good this time! I think you should only change the flora inside the rooms. For example tree with the parrot and that big leaf plant - doesn't fit there at all. Try to use that plants which appears in Zao update. The dark ones. Also - there is wall missing in second screen (down from this energetic coal basin thing).

Really. You are improving really quick. There are too many walls for my taste - but still, maybe you wanted to achieve some kind of effect with them. Great! Really like it.

 

[Alegres]

Thank you Redrax, I will change the flora. And thanks for noticing missing wall =) What I did is not even 50% of the whole city so I'll have time to improve more yet =)

 

[Peroxide]

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/1295/uc6.png

Just looks plain out spammed, also some of the other parts had bugs (the marque), Else I guess the best you could do to make it look a tad less spammed is widen the area. Still looks okay, just not something I'd like to play on.

 

[Alegres]

Thanks Peroxide. I know that this screen:

looks spammed. I think that I'll remove that big thingy next to my character.

New pieces:

Warriors trainer place

Druids square

 

[Limos]

The third picture looks great, others look good too.

 

[Alegres]

Thanks Limos! =)

 

[GhostX]

I FUCKING LOVE YOUR UNDERWORLD CITY!!!!!!

AMAGAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(comment isn't as long as others)
so

AMAGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAd



pretty epic tbh..

And to anyone who disagree; go fuck yourself

 

[Limos]

It's really good.

 

[Alegres]

Lol guys =) I didn't expect such a positive reaction from your side =) Thank you very much! Thaks GhostX, thanks Limos. Thanks for all comments =)!

 

[Siegh]

Really good, I dislike the jungle plants but you have some clever ideas.

 

[Alegres]

Thank you Siegh =) Didn't have enough time to continue the city, so I mapped random dragon spawn. Nothing innovative here: