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Sharp, you do realize that its a lava fall from its mouth? :p Though, he should remove the drawbridge if you ask me :p
 
The drawbridge was for the showoff. Only added it, to make it possible for people to see what's down there there. If it aint there, you wont be able to see the quest room.. so I don't know if I will let it stay or remove it by something else. Thanks for the replies!

Edit: could anybody tell me where the hell the stones are, used on waterfalls? Need to test something.. you guys probably know what I will try haha.
 
Make a stone bridge? Use the mountain archway to add depth to it. But great work dude!
 
to the next page ;o
Here's a little teaser of Imari, the tulum city of Etherbank..


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Mountain is abit plain.. Add the mountain wall grass? And some "eye candy" ;)
 
well i didnt want to add any grass or nature elements to it as that would ruin the setting (supposed to be the inside of a mountain, gona make it permanently dark there)
but i added some details to the unfinished areas so here it is now with some minor changes:

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It's better but its too grey in the mountain.. I understand what you're doing but maybe some of the mountain plants "8014" would liven it up abit. You would still get that growing inside near water. (: nice anyway it looks interesting to say the least
 
Well, here's the finished temple
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I'll just go out and say what nearly everyone is thinking: it's bad. It's just bad.
The shape of the temple is just nonsense, the strokes dirt in the temple looks horrible, you've probably never bothered aobut detaililng it and it's so extremely random.

For now, keep it to 2-3 different types of trees, I suggest doing something in the same colour. Place trees down in groups with bushes, don't just randomly throw them around.
Delete, for god sake, the thrones, the ice, fire, earth and energy thingy (can't recall the name) and remove the pillars and statues and everything inside there, eh...
Work on your shape of the temple, go through 'nature' and look for interesting things you can use (I'll go ahead and say tufts, maybe?) and start putting some effort into making it.

I'm not trying to be offensive in any way, I just wanna help you D:
 
Your tree walls aren't bordered, and there are smooth wall corners you should look into as well
 
Updated: the core of the axe smiths:
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Personally i dont like the suare with the fires on top of that tower ,because i find that they dont work good with rest of the map.
but in total , the cave and lave look very nice :)
 
idk if i agree because i think as pointed out, on a whole those tiles may fit. The structure is awesome in my eyes! :> i wan C MAOR!
 
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