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Somewhere deep in the jungle

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Peroxide said:
D: looks pretty bad, and way too straight, don't use autoborder for roads and nature either,
I did a thais revamp of a temple once, check it out. may help, http://otland.net/f57/evora-birth-new-project-129076/index92.html#post1344976
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why not autoborder for roads? and what do you mean by too straight?

Luffy1255 said:
The shape of the temple is just nonsense, the strokes dirt in the temple looks horrible, you've probably never bothered aobut detaililng it and it's so extremely random.
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GhostX said:
and don't have it symmetrical if it is supposed to be natural. Most natural things are weathered/altered for the surroundings. i.e. tree's and plants grow towards light. (the sun isn't directly upwards. So maybe have a deformed shape a bit.
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Yh but the way it was sone was bad. When i meant symmetrical i meant inside. Nature isn't perfect everywhere...

As for what i meant with the shape.. If you make it a tree, then yes vary it slightly, but you didn't make
It look like a tree. It is boxy.

It is better than the first tho.. So keep tryinh

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Vary the shape via curved walls not boxy ones
 
Delita Hyral said:
How does those green plants live in icy regions? o_o
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Well if the water isn't froze, and some ice is melted.. i think it can grow. I am pretty sure we still find some plants in ice climates :>

Tho maybe it is a little heavy on the green bushes.. maybe a few less would be better. But i love the peice in general.
 
Delita Hyral said:
How does those green plants live in icy regions? o_o
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Plants grow in summer -> Winter comes -> Snow on plants..
So just imagine it was summer and switched to winter and got stuck forever.

I love that piece :)
 
Not so sure about flame in the broken wall.. rest is quite nice, although people moan about metal fittings all the time, they stand out too much here.. Maybe use the stone versions? - just a thought.

Overall the piece is quite nice, interesting and i like it! :>
Keep it up!
 
The metal fittings at the top of the stairs are wrong placed and the spitting fire should be gone. Aint sure what to add insteed. The floor is quite detailled itself, but it misses some nature. I did search some details fast for you on the mapeditor. The most part of stones are foundable in the raw > nature palette. here you go:
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The structure is awesome btw!
 
What i originally sent in for my mapping competition entry BUT i realised it wasn't that good and withdrew this entry and entered another one. Though, i don't want it to go to waste :> (this will feautre within my project.)

"I decided to go exploring through the Pipilo mountains, i guess i can rest here for a moment!"
"There are some beautiful spots up here! Especially for such a dangerous area!"
"The gate was sealed! I guess I will have to sneak inside without being seen!"
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Nothing is true! Everything is permitted! "I must take a leap of faith into this haystack!"
"Looks like i'm in! Time to explore..."
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