Donation Island 25% Complete

[MeloB]

So this is the donation island im working on:

 

[Zakeen]

Maybe add some grass puffs, trees, add some debris on floor etc, looks so empty.

 

[Nigtwisj]

Less autoborder my dude.

For example look at the coast line compared with autoborder

Spoiler: Autoborder

And using raw

Spoiler: Raw

 

[MeloB]

Less autoborder my dude.

For example look at the coast line compared with autoborder

Spoiler: Autoborder

And using raw

Spoiler: Raw

I dont under stand what you mean they both look about the same just a few diffrences

Is this what u mean??

 

[Jfrye]

What he means is to have less straight spots and try to use more "turns" to make it look more natural. The second attempt is a lot better, but there are some places that just look bad. The little green spots that have borders backed up back to back, with a little brown streak in the middle just looks bad.

I would look over the picture he posted a little more, and try to get some more inspiration to make the shape a little better. Also, in my opinion, I would use the other sand/water border. The one where the water actually looks like it is coming up on the sand.

 

[Anderson]

good job

 

[danick10]

I do not like the dirt border over the wooden planks, and the waterfall over a wooden wall, but the rest looks cool ;p