First Mapping :)

[ontit]

Hello everyone, this is my first mapping, i hope you like it.

As a beginning of 2 pictures:



I don't know, it could be hell city



I will wonder comments

 

[Shingo]

I like it. ;p

Here are some tips: (all my opinion)
Screen 1:
1.Stairs bugged.
Add some more details in temple. (like small stones, some grass borders oso, maybe some cobwebs, debris, rock soils...)
Don't use 1 of the same floor with these tiles.
The pillars dont match the walls. (well, it looks nice but a lil weird)
Pavement dont fit in a lava theme(my opinion)
Add some more details in the walls, like u did in the second screenshot.

Screen 2:
add gate(9471-9484) in stead of gate(9939-9952).
I also dont like the rope ladder..


Well, Ill rate a 7.3, cos I think u spend alot a time on it and cos ur a beginner.


Peace.
Shingo.

 

[ontit]

First of thanks for your comment and warned me.
I will fix them. Like i said, i'm new at this job

 

[Shingo]

First of thanks for your comment and warned me.
I will fix them. Like i said, i'm new at this job

I think u can become a real good mapper, If u really take a look at the critism of others.(most of the big players, like Neon, Magnetico, Darklord, Peroxide, etz.

Shingo.

 

[ontit]

Thanks, I will be more careful after that.

 

[sir viet]

damn i totally suck at buildings.. cant even make 1 lol i just started too