- Apr 8, 2020
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Not a troll, literally what I thought when I first saw it. Despite this, it is quite good ofc.Yeah, ignore that dami troll Its quite good, though needs a bit more polishing and work on perspective. Keep it up!
you were right with the leg's looks paralysed. I completely agreed on that.Not a troll, literally what I thought when I first saw it. Despite this, it is quite good ofc.
Tip: Make the gap between feet longer and make the legs look more natural instead of being straight af.
The chest with shoulders is intentionaly in this position. it gives the same effect as you would do it in real life. this way he look more like he standing straight with the arms tucked back.The overall perspective needs a bit more attention, the upper part of his body is leaning back a bit.
The legs definitely improved with Dami's feedback, but their anatomical design still needs a little more study. Great improvement anyway.
Chest & shoulders isn't the main problem, but the angle of the entire upper body who's leaning back a few degrees (yellow line), and should be near 45º (green line) mostly. Made a quick edit and also pointed some other basic mistakes.
Perspective fundamentals mostly, I recommend to train drawing boxes, cylinders and this kind of basic stuff in perspective to improve at it.