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jogui1

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PLZ DON'T FlAME! Im A Beginer

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Don't Flame just give's tip's and idea's:thumbup:


Rate To Plz:p
 
i said don't flame me!
and no not 10min wurk im a begginer don't map that fast-.-
 
You mixed too much ground in west (south of cave thingy)
Flowers on the water don't look good,
Also it's too squary and add some grass tufts.
I suggest you must look at some tutorials ;)
I know you are beginner but you can do better :)
4/10
 
You mixed too much ground in west (south of cave thingy)
Flowers on the water don't look good,
Also it's too squary and add some grass tufts.

thanks i added tuft's
And the flowers look better ingame than at the map editor ;)
and the ground u dont realy see over mixed in game to:)


Thank's For Ur Tip's!

People That Wanna Look Ingame Can Alway's Look
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Sisaro u got tip's to?
Or can u only flame people?
 
Sizaro ffs stop flame. you have been a beginner too once.

Well i can say it is too squary. use the 1square brush in the sides of the island and make it more realistic.

and if you make a road. try to keep in one brush, cobblestone,dirt, dark cobblestone etc. :)

well keep it up! :)
 
  • To many lilypads
  • Squary (you are using RME then you can make some more shape)
  • To mixed up roads.
  • No shops? :S

4/10 because it's your first map. Good luck in the future :)
 
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