Need Help With Script

[dualshock3]

dudes,
i need help fixing this script, if anyone knows how to pls help.

it's a script to be teleported to the second part of a quest, if you did the first part u get an storage value (needed to step in), and then if u step in a tile u get teleported to the second part

function onStepIn(cid, item, position, lastPosition, fromPosition, toPosition, actor)
        if(getPlayerStorageValue(cid)) then
                return true
        end
    if  PlayerStorageValue(cid, 12345) then
        local destination = {x = 18856, y = 18919, z = 6}
        doTeleportThing(cid, destination, true)
        doPlayerSendTextMessage(cid, 25, "Welcome to Second Part")
        doSendMagicEffect(getPlayerPosition(cid), 10) 
           else
        doPlayerSendTextMessage(cid, MESSAGE_INFO_DESCR, ".") 

end     
        return true
end

 

[Cykotitan]

function onStepIn(cid, item, pos, fromPos)
	if isPlayer(cid) then
		if getCreatureStorage(cid, 12345) == 1 then
			local destination = {x=18856, y=18919, z=6}
			doTeleportThing(cid, destination)
			doSendMagicEffect(pos, CONST_ME_TELEPORT)
			doSendMagicEffect(destination, CONST_ME_TELEPORT)
			doPlayerSendTextMessage(cid, MESSAGE_INFO_DESCR, 'Welcome to Second Part')
		else
			doPlayerSendTextMessage(cid, MESSAGE_INFO_DESCR, 'Message when the player doesn\'t have the quest value.')
		end
	end
end

 

[dualshock3]

thanks you testing!

 

[DropshotZ]

I need a script where my character's color changes fast can someone help me ?
MSG ME OR SOMETHING PLZz

 

[DropshotZ]

I need a script where my character's color changes fast can someone help me ? MSG ME OR SOMETHING PLZz

 

[ond]

Perhaps you should create an own topic? Just a thought.

 

[DropshotZ]

how i just started on this ? ond