Nikolai's Sprites

[Klank]

Hello

Im new to spriting and im open for critism.
Im planning to be good enough to make sprites for Althea.
Hoping to get tips, hints and help!
My first sprite ever made after i watched some tutorials:

PS: These sprites are not for other's to use.
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Not happy with it, but ill throw it out.

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[Dezell]

Nice shit!

 

[Klank]

Still i learning progress haha.. I tried to make a armor.. But it sux, has no good shapes
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EDIT: Fixed armor

 

[Klank]

I tried to make another armor.. For some reason i really like gold .... I am really struggling on making shapes inside the outline.. struggling on outline to so xD
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[Dezell]

Nice armor!

 

[Klank]

Tried to make a helmet. Im not sure what i feel about it .. I would love to get some criticm on what i can do better...
Saphire Helmet
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Berserk Axe
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[Klank]

No comments? I would really like to know if im doing good or not :/
This is my third day spriting, and i would really appriciate some help on what i could do better..
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[Thorn]

mmm if i were you, i would use a black outline in the helmet and the shades with a darker grey, maybe it helps

 

[Klank]

mmm if i were you, i would use a black outline in the helmet and the shades with a darker grey, maybe it helps

Thank you, i will try that tomorrow Im currently making shapings at the server map

Edit: I edited helmet, what u think? ^

 

[hehemidu]

Bump deserves more attention, great first time sprites imo!

 

[Anevis]

You are definitely going in good way. One tip I often give is to keep dark outline and avoid lineart/black pixels inside.
Just keep spriting :>

 

[Klank]

You are definitely going in good way. One tip I often give is to keep dark outline and avoid lineart/black pixels inside.
Just keep spriting :>

Thank you : )
Will do !

I did a starter sword, i am thinking of making a starter kit for my server

 

[vTune]

Looks great!

 

[Klank]

Looks great!

Thank you.. Warms my heart :,)

 

[Yacoob]

Try to do items in 32x32 of 64x64 etc. Remember this

 

[Klank]

Try to do items in 32x32 of 64x64 etc. Remember this

Im doing the items in 32x 32.. ?
Starter axe

 

[Dezell]

That axe was nice!

 

[HalfAway]

Looks good imo.

 

[Simon Here]

Nice Sprites