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[RME] Suggestions?

Okay new creation
First wyvern [jungle] attempt.. It took me a long time to figure out what would match... I feel like I over-edited it and at the same time.. needs more detail xD Well you tell me.. [once again i dont care about the outside, this time i didnt even bother to put anything outside xD]

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and yes i already know there are a couple of bugs in the walls [noticed them while looking the pic here xD]
 
I'm too tired to write anything, but here's a wyvern cave from my map. I'll probably write what I believe is wrong tomorrow :p

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Good night!
 
made this one very quick, took about 5min, not very good detailed, but just how I would have done a jungle/wyvern spawn

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And dont be afraid of getting your own "style".

Neon/Chauz Style etc, aint always the best imo. It's good for showoff, but I would'nt wanna play their maps.
 
I didn't know what details to add... suggestions..?

First floor
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Second Floor
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Third Floor
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Fourth Floor
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All
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[First time making such a mountain that big.. like 1 floor after another after another o_o]

Edit: Already noticed a couple of missing edges and walls
 
k ty, when more suggestions are made, ill make a new pic with the suggestions added
 
Axtrox said:
I didn't know what details to add... suggestions..?

[First time making such a mountain that big.. like 1 floor after another after another o_o]

Edit: Already noticed a couple of missing edges and walls
Click to expand...

Cyclopses doesn't fit in such small passages, that would be more suitable for rotworms or trolls :p

-Make the "cave-space" bigger
-try skull pillars and the big blueish stone chairs and tables
-redo the dirt floor wth RAW, it looks squary
-Fix the dirt floor up(more rough dirt)

I'll post an example later, right now I'm gonna PK some nub on an OT :thumbup:
 
Ty [Im writting all this suggestions down, once im done making random maps.. i will make rly good maps with the suggestions]... But would you tell me what to fix in the wyvern spawn?
 
Oh, yea, I forgot that :p

Here's a couple of tips:

-Stone floor can't border over the muddy floor(The mud floor doesn't have a border, just replace it with stone floor. You could also make the mountain brown instead of grey and change all stone floor to the muddy one)
-Don't place flowers and plants on stone floor and muddy floor
-IMO, grass tufts looks bad with jungle grass, I'd remove them(There are people that disagree with me on this, you can decide whether you want them or not)
 
ill try... :p but so i dont make so many mistakes, can u make one and ill see wat i could do..?
 
Ty, I will not release it today cuz I'm playing tibia rl :p also cuz im trying to make all walls, floor, decoration RAW and ermm its hard for me ;P
 
Kay I'm done [just in time b4 bed ;P]

Ermm there aren't any special details, I need suggestions on wat to add to the tower

First floor:
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All:
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Here we go again xD

-It's too big, it will give the wrong feeling when walking it
-Have you really used RAW only? It doesn't look like you have :p(Note that you don't have to use RAW for everything. For example, the walls @ my mountain, the sand rubble and the top(the stone ground) is done with autoborder.
-The poison field and the corpses looks really odd, and so does the flowers in the dirt
-You shouldn't put valuables, for this one honeycombs(even if they aren't THAT valuable), on the floor for someone to pick up every server restart
-Skip the stone ground #2, it doesn't look good there ;p


Now, for the nature:

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