- It is a very big temple with a lot of empty space and only three depots.
- The temple does not have protection zone.
- You are able to push away players from the depot.
- The depot boxes are facing the wrong way.
- The fundamental architecture is very lackluster.
- Lack of details.
Here is a recreation of your temple (
see picture below). I did not want to change any theme or your idea so I made it with similar dimensions and style.
It's still ugly. Very ugly.
But I think you should be able to create something basic like this. Sure it might be ugly, but make it functional at the very least.
So a few pointers:
- Make sure you are making the depots correctly.
- Use protection zone tile tool (green area of the picture, in the teleport room).
- Add windows and lamps.
- Add a few ground details (stones, moss) to make it look less plain.
- Add a few dustbins and perhaps mailboxes (common stuff to find in a temple/depot).
- Try not to create a completely square-ish building.
- Don't create a temple with too big dimensions.
- Do not make empty space between rooms -- put rooms/depots aligned in the corners.
1. Remake
2. Original from the video.