What do you think about this?

[Donio]

As the title says What do you think about this map I made.
It is supposed to look like a shopping mall, or I tried to
make it to look like one. Rate and leave comments on what
needs to be improved and such!

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[Neon]

Sry to say...
Sux hard. Look some tutorials

 

[Donio]

why does it suck?, is it the roof?
cuz I have not learnd how to use the new roofs yet xD

 

[loveinabottle]

the shape is bad, the roof is bad, the detailing is bad.. and its so empty. just continue to map and youll get it

 

[Neon]

Man =( Why is always Empty in the picture

 

[CChris]

I think it has been mapped very well. Hunting in this place will be great because of the open spaces. Palladins can run around etc. Just add some blood to the alters and hangables like skeletons etc and place other things like vials of blood on the altar.

 

[Donio]

What do you mean with empty I dont rly get that, If you mean in the rooms,
then its supposed to be npcs selling stuffs. Thats why I tried to make
it like a shoping mall xD

 

[adnan]

Aint bad bro

 

[supershady]

well i didn't like it i'm sorry .. it's not so good .. needs a better geometric shape .. + trying another roof and the details are really lost .. you lack so many skills .. watch some of MMb's tutorials
Untitled Document you'll be alot bette don't worry and don't trust the Word <SUX> because nothing sux for a new beginner .. just go for it .. you'll be professional soon!

 

[Donio]

okey thanks for all the feedbacks, but I wont stop tryin to make this "mall" better!

 

[supershady]

i bet you'll keep it up .. i'll see ya at the top soon

 

[Donio]

You can count on that

 

[supershady]

if you needed any help i can be helping you as much as i could .. just Pm me or add me on my msn

 

[Nikkster]

I didn't like it, sorry.

 

[Donio]

I got just a question lol, when you read that other people dont like it, do you post like them or you dont actually like it? xD

 

[Icetear]

You got to remake the shape. It's too squary for my eyes.
Sorry to say this, but I agree with Neon's comment on this piece.

 

[Donio]

I have edited the map! what do you guys think now?

Floor 1:

Floor2:

Floor3:

I actually think it is looking alot better now then before, or?

 

[loveinabottle]

its even worse now..

 

[Donio]

Why? lol

 

[loveinabottle]

rather have it empty then put bad details