betoxz
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Some quick things, since im in a hurry.. XD
- Windows -> The should not be having those... uhm.. Side thingys... facing inwards. So only put them on the east and south sides. For the north and west sides, place the ones without any "side thingys".
- And remove the thick grass borders on the middle house.
- The door in the shop.. You need to sidestep to it = Very weird.
- on Floors higher than 7 you should not use the shaded staircases, look for the ones with only a square and black in the middle, this way people can see down to the other floor and see the staircase that is down there.
Cant comment more now, running late for class XD
Good Luck!
Nice observations , i am going to fix it now the, grass borders from the houses, the wrong situated windows from depot, and the staircases, thanks Falarion!
It´s really not a bad first attempt, nice!
Some more tips behind the ones falarion already stated:
- Should be better if you could reach the shop also from north / west.
- You shouldn't use grass as a roof.
- The houst s-w is really rpg'ish, is positive!
- I don't like the combination of the wooden dp tiles and the tiles before the DP.
- The path also looks great.
- The house situated at the top of north-west looks like it will fall if you don't place anything below there.
I will try to use, another dif grass of somthing else..
thanks you too Sentielo!