Well guys, i was kinad bored so I began to write a story. I got bored of writing it so I'll post it here.
I got up to chapter 4 but I'll post them after wards!
Feel Free to comment! Please only constructive Criticism
Hope you like it!
regards,
Arlianin
Codename: Hawk's eye said:Chapter 1Steve Anderson was 15 years old and he was living in London. He had recently finished eighth grade and he was going to begin his freshmen year. He had gotten a principal’s award signed by the queen of England and his parents were really happy. As a gift, they had decided to take Steve to a vacation in Hawaii. Steve had a lot of friends and a girlfriend. She was named Carolina and she was beautiful. She had even been named vice-president of the class and she was also one of the best students in school.
Aero Crisis
Steve had already packed everything up for his trip to Hawaii. He quickly got his list and made sure he had everything. He had his clothes, iPhone 3G, his agenda, a photo of his girlfriend and a game boy. Yes, he was ready to travel. He grabbed his personal items such as his favorite games, his iPhone charger and his wallet with $200 cash. He had a credit card in there just in case he needed it. Now, he grabbed his backpack and his things. He ran downstairs and shouted, “I’m ready mom!” After that, he went directly to the kitchen and grabbed a sandwich from the fridge. The way to the airport was long and it was not suggested to travel without eating before. He heard footsteps so he ran back to the doorway and picked up his stuff.
“Hurry up mom” Steve quickly shouted, “It’s getting late. The plane departs in 3 hours!” They lived near 2 hours from the airport so it was nice if they were to leave early. Finally, Steve’s mom came downstairs with his little brother’s case. Steve’s brother was named Archibald and he was 9 years old. It was a large difference though both were good friends and never fought. Steve’s dad also came down a few minutes after his mom and he was carrying his sun glasses, his BlackBerry and a list to check everything was ready. The ladder was breaking down so Steve’s dad fell to the floor and he hit himself in the leg. He didn’t brake it but It was semi-fractured. Steve was who carried all the bags to the car and finally, they were on their way to the airport.
The highway was crowded with people since the president of the United States of America was visiting the city. There were police cars, black and large cars were also following and a limousine in the middle with two motorcycles on its sides. Also, for precaution there was a helicopter flying above. Steve was amazed at what he was seeing. He had always wanted to be the president of something and now, he could see how it was like. Even though the highway was crowded, they got just in time for the plane. Archibald wanted to buy a few candies in the store before entering the plane but both of his parents didn’t want to waste more time. This made Archibald cry and caused Steve to run and buy the candies while his parents and his little annoying brother were in line. Steve was fast enough to make it to where his parents were. Once they had passed the checking of the passports, they had to run to the gate. They were not sure so they took out the flight passes. Then, they noticed that they had left the flight passes in the passport check. They all had to run back and grab the passes. Then the loudspeaker said “Passengers of flight 9981 please come forward to gate 3.” Steve quickly went faster than the rest of his family and grabbed the flight passes. Then, they all ran to the gate #3. There, they were all sweating and they seemed to have been running at a marathon. Once in the gate they got in line when again the loudspeaker said, “Flight 9981 has technical problems, place wait in the seats next to the gate. We will bring further news once the problem is resolved. Thanks for your patience.”
It was around 2 hours until they could finally enter the airplane. It was a long line but finally they got inside. Once in there, they found their seats and placed their bags in the case above them. The plane quickly started and they began their flight. It was an LAN airplane with its game and video window in front for entertainment. That at least took care of Steve and his little brother. Steve fell asleep pretty fast and when he woke up, he guessed it had been a few hours. The pilot had announced they were reaching the coast of Mexico in no time. But then, a red light began to blink and the hostesses ran in the aisles. The plane was pretty big and there were hundreds of passengers. The pilot didn’t say anything and then there was an explosion. The right motor had blown up and the plane was falling. Steve stood up and ran to the back of the plane. Then his family stood up all praying to god for something good to happen. Right after that, the plane crashed in water and Steve kicked off the emergency door. The plane was starting to drown with every person inside it. Steve jumped outside landing on a piece of metal from the plane’s wing. Instantly, he hit his head when falling to the ground and his eyes completely blurred. Then he heard the shouts of every passenger and the people inside. He saw his mother running and then fell unconscious.
Codename: Hawk's eye said:Chapter 2
Dead or not?
A few hours later, Steve woke up realizing he was the only survivor of the crash. With no more family left, he began to cry. The memories of family adventures and school friends came to his mind with great pain. The tears were falling from his dirty face to the metal where he was lying down. He sat up and began to think on what he could do. He saw what was around and saw nothing but water. Luckily, he found a compass in the water and quickly grabbed it. He knew that the plane had crashed near the coast of Mexico. He thought for a while which direction should he go. Finally, he left it to luck. He grabbed a small piece of metal and used it to move towards the western side of the ocean. It took him a few hours to finally see the coast of Mexico. He grinned and looked up at the sky. “Thanks god!” he shouted as he laughed.
30 minutes later he was already lying in the sand of Mexico. He was glad that he was alive but sad at the same time because of the fact that his parents with his brother had surely drowned on that plane crash. It wasn’t long for him to sleep. As soon as he had closed his eyes, he saw nothing more. He roughly woke up with the sound of engines nearby. He quickly got up and hid within the bushed that were around. The sound got closer each second that passed. When he turned around, he saw a huge machine getting closer to the beach. He ran to another bush to look at it but it was then when he saw the 3 guards carrying each an Ak-47. He knew something wrong was happening the instant when he saw those guards with no police symbols. Steve wanted to know more but right inside him he knew that if he did a wrong move and he would be caught, there would be no way back. He thought about it and it was then that he decided to give it a try.
Steve ran forward as fast as he could and he got behind a small tree. He was only a few meters away but he could feel something had gone wrong. When he looked back at the guards, he noticed one of them was moving towards the place where he had been hiding. Steve began to sweat like never before and he even thought he would die. It was not long enough that the guard turned around and saw Steve. Steve tried to run but his feet were stuck to the ground he could do nothing about it. The guard called his three other friends and they all turned and aimed at Steve. Unfortunately for him, there had been an extra worker getting near him from the back of the tree. He was caught and knocked out. Steve woke up a few hours later. He felt himself ok but he knew he was dizzy. Something had happened to him. He tried to stand up but he would keep on falling. Somehow, all his strength had been drained by something. He scanned himself really fast and noticed a black spot on his arm. He looked at it and noticed that he had been injected something. Steve managed himself to sit in the floor though he indeed felt no strength or pain on his body. He looked around and noticed he had been taken to a compound somewhere inside Mexico. It was an old place; it was made fully of metal and a few bricks. The place had been used to fight before. He turned around and saw the door slowly open and the footsteps of various people. When the door finally opened, 27 armed men surrounded Steve and aimed at him. From the middle, a masked man came out. He had the voice of someone Steve recognized. Though, his mind wasn’t working well enough to figure out who the voice was of, Steve tried to remember it. The masked man then spoke, “Greetings little hmm… kid?” Steve didn’t know what to respond so he kept himself quiet. The man spoke again, “So, you don’t want to talk? Well then, just kill him.” Steve shouted “NO! Please no!” Then the masked man got serious and kneeled down to Steve. He asked once again “Who are you?” Steve quickly told him his name and what had happened. The man laughed and stood up. He then said, “I am Jack Petson”
Steve looked confused after that meeting. Why did he say his own name and why was he using a mask? If he really was up to something, Steve had to know what it was. Steve had recovered the strength so he stood up and walked around exploring the place. Jack finally came back. This time, there were only 4 armed people around him. Jack got close to Steve and told him clearly, “Sorry but I can’t let you live” Steve was amused of what he was hearing. Then, one of the men turned to Steve and aimed at him. Randomly, he turned around and shot the other two guards. Then aimed at Jack and finally said, “Hands on your back and go down to your knees!” Jack then turned around and slowly murmured “You were my favorite… I got no other choice.” He quickly took out a gun but the guard was faster and shot him twice. Both shots crashed into Jack’s chest and he immediately fell to the ground dead. Steve could see all the blood around the dead body of the man lying down on the stone floor. The guard finally looked at Steve and said “Come with me”.
I got up to chapter 4 but I'll post them after wards!
Feel Free to comment! Please only constructive Criticism
Hope you like it!
regards,
Arlianin
