My first sword ever

[TaeginX]

Hi there this is my first ever sword give me your feedback i would really apreciate it

Here it is...

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[Element]

To be completely honest, it's pretty ugly - good to see you've at least attempted to shade correctly though. For starters, the light seems a little bit off, even though the direction isn't wrong..

The 'point' of the sword is non-existent, you should really define the tip a little more. Always use black outlines on items, it's pretty much a requirement. All in all not too bad for a first, just work on shaping and shading in general

 

[GoD vrastus]

i also think that it isnt so good but i must recognize your effort because i know that is very difficult to do something like this well done

 

[infamouslink]

I kind of like it, Make the tip a bit more sharp

 

[TaeginX]

ty for the feed back i realize the sword sux a bit and i readid the tip and i know its pretty basic but its my first one

and link why you like it is cause it resembles the master sword which i based it upon
and obviously you are of fan of the LOZ series

 

[TaeginX]

Alright i have readone the sword tell me which is better even though its noobish because i am new to spriting plz judge it as best you can


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[BrasseN]

@up:
The first was better

 

[TaeginX]

Ok i tries to make a better sword i dont know if its good but o well... and here we go,


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[Arlianin]

Thats a little better but still, try to make it look like a "sword", it should be larger. the shading is a little good. I think you can do better.

 

[BrasseN]

I agree with Sir herik.
They looks like daggers.
Make the blade bigger and longer.
Your shading is kinda good too.

 

[Sekrey]

kind of ugly but there are anyway cool xD

 

[Lil Saint]

its OK for ur first one

 

[Snel pUppie]

The last sprite you made was kinda okay but you should make the blader longer.

 

[Lothar99]

Agreed. And maybe change the handle to make it less straight. Like now it looks so simple. Maybe edit it and you can make it much better.

Yours,
Lothar99

 

[Snel pUppie]

Yeah make the handle thinner maybe?

 

[don floris]

i like your swords, ill try to make 1 btr. If its done ill post it

 

[Arlianin]

Good luck. last sprite is good but still needs improvements.

 

[Jaed Le Raep]

Awwwwwww, what a cute little dagger!

 

[soulblaster]

Well, for the first sword, is not that bad, but you could make it bigger

 

[William]

Nice one